One of the most one of a kind stories I've read so far. I like it. Love the narration and the story. Hope you update soon! Oh, and to answer your question, I prefer long chapters over short ones.

I love long chapter. :D ! Please update soon bye

Long chapters, please. I am seriously digging this story. Can you pm me? I have some questions. Thanks! 'Bye!

-Liliana-

Good to see another chapter, and to find out what is really going on.

Wow. This is getting interesting, but where's Pitch's daughter? )

THIS STORY CAME BACK! I'M SO FREAKING HAPPY!

I have never felt the excitement and pure desperation to want to read a fic as much as I do yours. I'd love it if you updated. I went through the whole day desperate to just get back to reading this

please please update soon!

I think this is brilliant! I love seeing Kozmotis! Will Jack get to see how the Pitch he knows came into existence? I suppose this'll give Jack a new perspective of his enemy. I really look forward to more.

Thank you very much for this story. Althought it has only two chapters, they are written very well, they're interesting and the whole concept of plot intrigues me. I would love to read more, to find out about 'new' Pitch personality, Jack's purpose in this strange world, I would love to see two of them interacting. Hah, it can be a good friendship or complete disaster (the worst thing is I cannot imagine what it will be, because despite you're good writher and your characters are great, YOU PUBLISHED TOO LTTLE).
A-aand that's my main problem with this story. It's too short. It really is. I don't have any suggestions, I believe in your imagination and intelligence (need no more proof after those two chapters).
So, greetings

HEY! IT WAS GETTING GOOD!

Awesome story, I love this :) please update soon!

Amazing story! I cannot wait to read more :)

y u no update?

Do you hate us? Do you wish us DEAD? Sadist...

Very interesting, I look forward to seeing where this goes.