I am confused.

Some may say it's a sick story and you're a mad author BUT I think the story is absolutely beautiful in its own way. It makes perfect sense to me that if you just live long enough you need some physical response to make you feel alive. I adored the ending of the story - I felt happy for both of them. Thank you for writing and uploading this story. 3

This was like nothing I've ever read. You did an amazing job!

Sadly this makes sense in a sick twisted way. My poor little heart cries out for them because of their dark twisted fate, and at the same time I'm happy it isn't me. I'd stick to my boring little life instead of going through something that crazy. I must say, you are an amazing author. Even if you weren't to write another Labyrinth fanfic, please write something else as your use of words (even translated) is a wonderful thing. Thank you for this.

Good.

i hate this story, its so fucking terrible. wow that really sucked, your a terrible writer just give up. who the fuck writes a story this weird? you should be in a mental hospital you fucking weirdo.

Please update! I got sucked in, and it just ended... Please, the story is really going somewhere. You have a great talent for imagery and creating an almost palpable environment. I need more! Lol

Wow keep up the good work

I like it but I didn't understand Hoggle, Ludo, and Sir Didymus's actions at the end of the chapter.

That made absolutely no sense whatsoever. So she was oiled up and used as a lightning rod, to bring a storm, and that made her Queen? Very disappointing.

Thank you all for your reviews)))). Someone needed me explain something, so here I am)))))

Everything is OK with Sarah and Jareth, the only 'problem' is that she is no longer human so we can not understand her logic anymore ;-)
They are together and they are in love. That's the happy ending. :-)

But - they left us, our world, and even Sarah's friends of her childhood. That's why her friends were so sad - they are just toys, and the girl's grown up.

I hope this will help)))) Love you!))))))))) FeyPlay

Wait wait wait wait! What? I'm confused! What's going on? This is not complete! Please PM me! I need details!

i don't understand. what happened?

Hehe, loved the moodswings. andthepainohyesthepain

I think it's awesome you wrote this in Russian first and decided to translate it yourself.
Was a spiffy read :]

And, haha, that ending with her friends seems kind of ominous. Tsk, tsk, not being happy for her. :P

Great story sad to see it end I do hope you change your mind and decide on writing again you do have talent :)