Reviews for A Certain Dangerous Experiment |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Static Shock? Cool. Love the reference (that is, if you are referring to what i think you are referring to). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this "Sixth". Keep up the nice work :) |
![]() ![]() Your OCs epitomize why people abhor such things. OCs have a stigma, and yours illustrate why that is. They over shadow canon characters, and you have the gall to believe you deserve to claim a Level 5 spot as your own personal plaything. For shame Marty Stu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Accelerator's time limit is 30 minutes now. GROUP extended the time limit and I always assumed the copy he made himself had the same time limit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously this is last chapter!? I thought this is just a chapter DX Anyway i waiting for your next story bud As for that from me P.S Cat you say!? What kind plot involve cat!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic has good flow and very good story plot... I wonder why there are no many review? This story is good I just asking question just asking question Do you have plan or future chapter to bring our baka spiky hair teen boy? I just asking... not to demand it early |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, i was wondering why a fic this good doesn't have much reviews... now i know why. You put Accelerator, Kuroko and the others as main characters but they only make cameo appearances. I'm guessing people who start reading this gets disappointed because you let their hopes up XD uhm... i didn't mean that in a bad way but i think it would be better if you just outwardly say that the main characters are OCs :3 nice work by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your Alexander OC. He's one of my favourite OCs in this fandom (not that there's many of them to begin haha) Would love to see more interactions from Alexander with the canon characters, but that's just me. |
![]() ![]() Teleporters cannot teleport other teleporters. It's stated in the novel. |
![]() ![]() well, this was surprisingly good. Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, this is PokeRescue18 delivering to you this special review of this fanfic: - You plot is rather interesting; however, your description needs improvement, but the details are well thought out. - There are a few grammar errors present in each chapter. - The abilities of your OCs are well-balanced and fits with their personality; although I can tell that several of them has the potential to be over-powerful, you managed to keep the balance of power. Here are some suggestions for this story: - You should include the main characters like Touma and Mikoto. Trust me, it'll make the plot a lot more interesting if think about it. On a side note, you can make one of your OCs meet up with Index! Trust me, it's going to be interesting to write. - I hope that you keep your OCs meaningful to the plot of your story. Well, that's all I've got. I hope that you would review my fanfic in return. My story is a crossover, but with To Aru Majutsu no Index and YuGiOh called "A Certain Duelist's Dream". Although I have finished writing this side-story, I'm planning to write a sequel. On the sequel, GREMLIN will be the baddies. What do you think of this? I hope you reply back. PokeRescue18 |
![]() ![]() ![]() RumihoXLast Order. JK. XD Rumiho is just like me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Misaka Worst is so funny. Can't wait til more. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this Alexander dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Are you implying that I, Alexander Terrarium, am not cool?! And that in trying to be cool, I am failing?" "Yes, Alex. And I much prefered your 'Magical Powered Kanamin' theatrics, before you watched Steins;Gate." I'll leave a proper review after reading some more XD |