This story is so good. Pleass do a sequel about how they heal Guinevere and how Arthur let his knight know about Merlin. Please do sequel pleaseee and thabks for this wonderful story

nice reveal fic. Arthur's reaction was a bit odd when he had just told Gaius to heal Merlin with magic, I'd think he'd be more shocked in that moment than angry. But I guess after all he grew up thinking and being told about magic and after so many people involved with magic have betrayed him he might have let his anger override his shock in some sort of defense mechanism.

I love how you took The Hollow Queen and kept everything cannon while adding your own insight. And of course protective!Arthur is just so much fun to read! For your TV show problem, have you tried the shows Sherlock, Doctor Who, and Supernatural? Or even Anime? Fairy Tail and One Piece are good animes, and they have over 500 episodes each.

Nice job! There was one bit on inconsistency. When Merlin used his magic, Arthur started shouting about how Merlin had betrayed him, yet he had given permission for magic to be used to save Merlin and, a few sentences before, had wanted to tell Merlin that it was fine for him to use his magic.
Still, this was pretty good! Loved the preview at the end too. That was intense!

Thanks for writing this, it's pretty great. Hope you'll do a sequel where they take Gwen the cauldren, it'd be interesting for him to do the magic and after Mordred shown up for Mordred to see him doing it as himself in front of Arthur. I wonder how that would change the dynamics?

That servant comment would have been the glaring admission without her intending to do it. As if she wasn't a servant, and they didn't run off to save her once or twice? Whew. I'm surprised Arthur didn't put her in the dungeons right then and there. What happened to Daegal?

Great story, but to many punctuation mistakes, especially run ons. It's a shame because this is one of the few stories I've read that has a good, strong plot and is portrayed well. Too many punctiuation, spelling, and other grammar error cause readers to lose focus on what you're writing and more on figuring out what you're trying to say. Thus, I strongly suggest a beta - a good beta that knows their grammar Then this will be fantastic and I can continue on to chapter three. Best of luck!

Nooooooo!

Must read next chapter now!

Ooh, it's so awesome to read a version where Arthur when to look for him (like he totally should have!).

-Ondo

Thiswas goodd story and I glad that you write it, seen how good writer you are I just have to read your next story

would love to read more. I realise this was probably sometime ago but I'm fairly new to this site.

This was a perfect ending. I especially love the descriptions you used, it new it sweet and emotional.

Fabulous story so far

I really like this fic! The one you're working on sounds like it will be good! Can't wait!

This was a really good story! I'm also really intrigued by the preview for your next one! Any chance that's coming soon?