I liked your story at first but Jack would NEVER kill ANYONE, accident or not. Angry or not I don't care. His magic may lose control, but killing people!? You write very well but I do not like the plot course you have taken my friend. I love Jack too much to chance reading where your plot may lead me. Good luck in your future endeavors and I encourage you to continue writing. I bid you farewell.

Incredible piece. Thank you for sharing it.

You're finally updating this amazing story, even though it was a little short. But don't worry, it was still good!
I'm so glad Annabeth finally woke up from her coma!

This was absolutely amazing. One of thee best and only stories I have ever read that gave a good, detailed, look into Jack's life as a human/newborn spirit. I adored this story, truly it is one of my favorites. :3

My heart skipped a beat and I almost screamed "WHAT?!" when I saw the name Annabeth. I thought I was still on the tab with the RotG and PJO crossover.
Seriously? Annabeth, like as in Annabeth Chase daughter of Athena and Fredrick Chase?
And when you mentioned "Jackson" I wanted to rip my hair out with frustration and some kind of weird joy from the Percy Jackson references from a animated movie fanfiction
Are you planning some secret sneak attack? Hit us some Rick Riordan where we least expect it, and that is outside a crossover in a Movie fic.

(Sorry if you have no idea what I'm talking about. You're a fangirl/boy, so you understand the fact most people don't understand half of what you say)

Now, I've gotta reread this. Great story!

I almost forgotten how much I loved this story and I would be very intrrested in a sequel. Thank you for writing and finishing this story and I love the ending.

That was beautiful! I loved it. I hope you do a sequel.

Huh? Did Annabeth wake up, or did she die? It sounds like she's been in coma for almost a year, so it's about time she wakes up, don't you think?

What a trader! his own father!

Jack: Wait... is she...
(Their father enters the room)
Albert: Jack... She is dead... is all your fault!
Jack: My fault?! I fell asleep by accident!
Albert: (Points a arrow at him) Get out!
Jack: What?! But I'm your son!
Albert: No... you were my son.. your just a winter demon now...
Jack: Fine... (grabs her body and fly's away)
Mother and father: You come back with her! (And voice fades away)
(Jack gets to the grave yard and barries her body)
Jack: Goodbye sis... May you always live on and remember me as a trickster, a winter spirit, your brother Jackson overland...

XD lol

I don't understand what does it mean about the bed she was left on. Did Annabeth die?

Time flies.

Is Annabeth from Percy Jackson and the Olympians? Because Annnabeth isn't a normal name.

Amazing chapter as always. I'm glad it's a happy ending, though I am a little upset that the story has to end. I guess all good things must come to an end at some point. Update soon.