harry/tonks is diisgusting, tonks should be with remus, you could have just made them friends and harry is meant for luna

Please hurry and update this story it’s so good. Keep up the good work

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Why oh why do all the stories that involve Harry and Tonks end up unfulfilled, incomplete, abandoned. More so with the stories of this caliber. This story is sublime, it is masterful, it was perfection.
I wish at the very least writers who do not finish stories would post a short outline of where they had wanted the story to go. That way readers could fill in the gaps but they had the path to go on. If I had the talent of the writers I could use my imagination but I don't which is why I read not write.

Interesting story but it sounds like tonks is going to betray Harry by sleeping with Bella. Plus she lied that her dad was killed she should of kept close to the truth. Hope Harry and tonks get their hea. But don't get why Bella and cissy can't be killed. She killed Sirius so she's dead that's not forgivable plus she's evil. More chapters please

Please update soon please! :)

This story is great I hope you will continue it I know you havent wrote in it in some time hopefully youll return for more great work.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

continues the story please

Great storyline, totally out there and different. I live it.

You are to be condemned to a special level of hell, reserved for child molesters and people who talk in the theater. You have a brilliant story, that's fairly well written and you give up on fanfiction or something? At least say something, like I'm not going to be able to update for a while because, [insert reason here], but no, it's better to fall off the face of the earth.

More please

Please don't abandon!

Nice to see Luna in character wih her allegedly imaginary creatures, blunt honesty, quirky logic, and intuition. Very nice scene with her breaking the ice. Would have liked to see Tonks as Aimee find Harry stuck on the train to build a further connection, but it's it still fine.

Great writing except for a few misplaced words here and there. I like how natural the series of events and dialogue seem. It fits in wonderful and not outlandish or sudden at all. The growing emotions and the drama of the deception is quite exciting. You say you know how this ends, but it's not complete. I hope you update at some point. Great work from what I've read.