i wish this had been finnished beucase that story sounds great
but if you cant you cant and thats that *shrugs*
this was a great story and i loved it

i achually thought the way you wrote elisibith/arthur was a great representation of the duality of arthurs life
he has his life as arthur the actor
and his life as elisibith a young naive noblewoman
and i love how it shows the mentality of actors in their roles of at the moment they are not them but the character they are playing they forgo their idenenty of a person playing a role to the life of their character whole in the zone
and i love how this shows that so well but talking about them as seperate character dispite the fact (accedently wrote act LMAO) that their in the same body which is prety much whats going on here
and i think that that just props to your writing skils that you were able to show that

I know I'm a little late...but I can relate to this chapter because I am also struggling with the idea of religion and how I might be betraying those ideals. You did well describing it. Thank you for helping me wrestle my thoughts through his wonderfully told tale of UsUk

Hello. Firstly, I am not a native English speaker but even I can see this story is really well written (I mean in grammatical way). The slow development and details were perfectly realistic. I felt every situation that the characters have fallen in every inch of my body. You reflected the aristocracy really well, it was great to see you put lots of effort to details like titles and backstories. And adding a final note was very thoughtful. I can only hope your life have become better in those past years. Please take care.

Amé tu historia

/3

hello! I'd like to say thank you for taking the time and energy to write this. It truly is a wonderful work of art and i enjoyed every second reading it. Very well written and I'm just appalled at this. All of this. Just... Thank you for sharing this with us. I do hope everything gets better for you and i know how late i am in sending this so i hope you excuse my 'tardiness'. Anyway, this piece of literature will definitely one of the top on my list of favourite fanfictions. Thank you for the summary at the end, I'm glad to know all went well for the characters at least.

Thoughts and love
H.C

I truly enjoy this story. The way you write is utterly amazing and fantastic. You have a way with words and plot twists. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it. Cheers

It's with great pain that I lay my eyes over (what I still hold scarce hope really won't be)your final words on this marvelous piece of literature, it is truly a loss to the worlds of art, fan fiction and prose in general that you are nit able to finish. Words fall short when trying to describe how beautiful and magnificent your work is, how stunningly written it is, and how much misery I feel at not being able to marvel at it for an extended length, that I am not able to follow this story in your exquisite brand of wordcraft.

Ugh I freaking Love this story this was the first FanFiction I read and got super into that it dragged me into the pit of darkness called shipping so let me just tell you THANK YOU !

WHYYYYYYYYYYYY YOU NEVER SHOWED IF ARTHUR AND ALFRED END UP TOGTHER

C'est vrai is actually it's true but it is skepticism so there

Thank you for this adventure, I enjoyed every single word and I admit, that you even made me cry... It is very well written and made my heart stop during the duel. I'm glad that you at least made a summary of the rest for us. We really appreciate it. I hope, that you life situation got better and you're now doing well, I know life can be hard sometimes, really hard, but for a good person like you, I'm sure the Sun will shine once more. Love, Suziana

I wish world turns your way and the heavens smile for you as you did for us. You may never come back to this piece but may you find peace at last.

When you said "Hey, hey, hey!" I immediately thought of Bokuto from Haikyuu if you know who he is.