Thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Very well-writen story, and great character building interactions! This is one to put in my 'favourites' collection!

If I had one veeerrrry tiny little nit-pick, there's just a few grammatical errors still dotted throughout. But they're few and far-between, and it didn't subtract anything from my enjoyment of reading this story :D

This fanfiction was amazing. I hope there are more like it.

I found this story intriguing if not interesting. So, now the question. It's been awhile, can we see them meet each other again? I hope so. Maybe not but would be nice. Well done on the writing dear lady!

I love good adventures stories and this story is up there on my list. A little late reading it but well done. Great writing with good cliffhangers. Anyone reading this, trust me you're love it.

Oh! Sgt. Smith is Bob from the Byzantium!

Just make sure he knocks her up good and proper...

Jeez. I go from being a sobbing mess from one story just to become a sobbing mess at the beginning of this one. Why do I do this to myself?

So you finished this nearly three years ago, but I'm still dropping you a line to let you know that your year-plus of work was definitely worth the effort!

Exciting to read! The transitions of Rose not knowing, wondering about something then knowing are well written! I like it a lot.

Just gorgeous! Thank you for sharing this wonderful adventure.

A very interesting story. I admit, I hate when the doctor regenerates cause it means he has lost more time of his ultimate life. I mean sure if time lords live to old age they can be more than 10000 years old, but if we assume that each regeneration dies of old at at about 1000 years, and he keeps dying in his first or second century, then he will be loosing so much possible life every time.

That being said, you handled this very well and I was well hooked until the end, which I also love how you handled it. I do admit to being sad that there doesn't appear to be a sequel, I was interested in finding out if Clara would be the companion he picked up, or if there would be a tag along once he got to Barcelona, and also what would happen when they got there. But very good story as a stand alone. Thanks for writing it.

Great story :) I enjoyed reading it. When I first started, I thought it would be more Riverx11, but then you explained about how you thought their relationship was when writing it during season 6, and then I kind of understood why you wrote it this way. Just a little disappointed because I love Riverx11, but I still like this story and what went on. I'm really glad Rose disintegrated Madame Kovarian, because it was bugging me that she didn't show up after the aborted timeline. Great job writing this :) I also liked how you wrote Jack haha

I enjoyed this. Good adventure story that could have been an episode. Would love to have followed up with Jack. I assume he'll be getting a visit from Rose to let him know they're not dead! The Doctor's attitude toward Rose during the escape seemed a little off and didn't get sufficiently explained for my tastes. And River seemed to "give up" on the Doctor rather easily. Otherwise, I felt the characterization was good.

I hope you write more Doctor Who in the future!

Quite wonderfully done.

Hiya! Just popping in real quick to say I really love your story! It's wonderful - everyone is so in character and it's all very believable and I love it a lot. Ugh. So much love. 3 in case messes that up that is a heart up there.

Anyway! For some reason, it looks like Chapter 9 has been replaced with Chapter 7! I read through the whole thing just to be sure. Instead of picking up after River's talk with Rose on the TARDIS, it actually goes back to the Doctor's talk with Rose that happened before that. And then Chapter 10 picks back up, presumably after whatever scene took place in Chapter 9, and it's all very confusing! I hate it when that happens, and since it remains swapped, I wasn't sure if you were aware of it yet!

Thanks again for writing such a lovely work! :D I think I'll keep reading and see if I can't figure out what's going on.

Sincerely, Mein Benutzername.