I can honestly say this was an amazing read, I loved it all.

Aha! Lots of interesting information in this chapter! I noticed that his parents are dead here, though I guess we don't know for sure. I like your Thor- very dedicated! And characteristically, it's his father-relationship that has the most tension here, though it's obvs loads better than in canon without the exacerbating scenarios of Jotunheim and a title. But best of all- palladium poisoning! That's a great branch off point!

Oh shoot- Loki *does* have his Marvel past! And it's coming back to bite him in a big way! I love how you *cough, cough* transplanted the comics story into this futuristic setting! XD And great that Tony can now be person-colored, which actually, hmmm not sure you're going this route, but if they can regrow lungs, what else can they grow?

Ah, great chapter. I like how Loki's specialty seems to be destroying things, even in code. (Between Fenrir and the jammer). And also that apparently the future has smart-cities, and Loki's helping run them! Fantastic! For a story about a guy who spends most of his time at home, the worldbuilding adds some wonderfully rich touches! XD. Also curious about why Loki's not in touch with his family, as well as this surgery/medical leave situation. All very interesting!

Well this has to be the damn best future-set Tony/Loki ghost-story AU I've ever read in my whole life. XD Seriously though, nice job. I'm loving the creativity as well as your clever little nods to this story's influences, like Fenrir, the code Loki "birthed," Tony's mansion going all haunted-house with the temperature and music, and the perfect choice of ACDC's Back in Black for hologram-Tony. I also liked the subtle worldbuilding you have in the cops pricking Loki's finger and the mention of his brother, and the fact that though Loki's personality isn't exactly dripping off the page, (it helps that he doesn't seem to be carrying around his Marvel past in this AU), he's still a bit cold and clinical. Oh, and also loved the fact that the house is programmed to automatically feed its user after 12 hours with no food, or I imagine Tony wouldn't've made it as long as he did! I did wonder where all the food came from (did the house order groceries?) Also curious to see what's up with these emergency pills, and how old Loki is in this. Well, allons-y!

This was an amazing ending to an amazing story. I'm only sorry I didn't read the end sooner

Loved this soooo much! Fabulously written, believable characters. Great job!

Really great idea for a story. Tony (and Loki come to think of it) never really planned for the future very well. Interesting way of bringing them together and having tech be the 'magic' saving them both. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Interesting idea for a fic. I like the way you included Ultron. Actually I liked the entite fic.

Thinking about abandoning my fascination with Science Bros and reexamining Loki/Stark. I am so enjoying this.

I've enjoyed this story, so different from other ones. Love the way you ended this. Lube as a ejaculate... excellent choice. ;)

Keep Writing,
Arctic

I can't believe it's over, but thanks for the amazing fic, I really love the story. Happy new year!

Lovely, thank you.

I loved this! Happy New Year! :D

Awesome Story! I had just finished chapter 30 when chapter 31 showed up :)