Sorry but what in the world is this "xxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxxM/RxxRatingxxxxxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxxM/RxxRatingxxxxxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxxM/RxxRatingxxxxxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxM/RxxRatingxxWarningxxxM/RxxRatingxxx"
Just use a line break and write in your authors note that after the line break is where the sex is. That business your using is really silly.

ALSO is Dean drunk was as well? If he's not and Amara is like it said in this chapter than that is RAPE. If your drunk you cannot consent to sex and if the other person isn't drunk they're taking advantage. I really hope you know this. And if this is what you wrote then I can't believe you'd ever think Dean would do something like that. Please be sensitive.

Please just check your grammar and sentences they're missing words from then so it doesn't make sense. I know this fic is old but its really confusing and it just puts people off from reading it.

Insteaf of using brackets in the middle of speech when someone pauses are whatever why don't you just end the speech then put they pause or whatever then start with a new speech mark again. Would be a lot easier. And the bracket thing in the middle of speech just looks weird.

"Cutting through the air, was heaviness footsteps. "

Heavy footsteps not heaviness. Heaviness is a adjective meaning it's for describing something but your not describing anything. Your using heaviness in the wrong context. For example a way of using the word heaviness would be "she could feel the heaviness." Just think about it you wouldn't say "I hear heaviness footsteps" would you? You'd say heavy. That's like saying "I can hear loudness banging" you'd say loud.

Seems interesting but you should check your grammar like "The insides of her eyelids felt like their were burning" it's they're not their. They're means they are burning. Their means that they belong to her like "their are her eyes." Just reread the bit I've pointed out and you'll see it makes no sense.

AWESOME
SEQUEL PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE

(This review does have some spoilers in it, so don't read if you haven't read the story all the way through!)
Hi! I haven't been on for a while, but I couldn't stop thinking about your story while I was gone! I left off at the most cliff-hangery part possible, and I was itching to know what happened next... I gotta say, it didn't disappoint! I loved the conclusion, and how Amara finally got the best of Tenebroin! I feel like you did an especially good job on that chapter, because I could practically see the scene unfolding before my eyes. You described everything so vividly, it was almost like I was there!
I was a little let down by the ending, but that's not because it wasn't fitting, or good or anything... it's just a bit of a bummer :S Despite the fact that I'm not too stoked about it though, I feel like it was a really artistic way to end this story, and I definitely give you props for it!
This story was really interesting, really well written with a wonderful OC that I thought you wove into the Supernatural universe beautifully. I'm a sucker for original story arcs, so I have to say, I was really impressed with Tenebroin and his background story and motivations, as well as the restrictions you set for him to rise from hell... one of my favorite parts of the story was when he said that thing about a soul being between heaven, Earth and hell! There's just something about that that I find really poetic. I thought it was really well done.
All that being said(I know, I'm a blah-blah head... sorry :S), I did feel like there were times when Sam, Dean and Bobby seemed a little out of character... I couldn't quite place my finger on what it was. I think some of the things they were saying just didn't sound right. Also, there were periods here and there in places that I thought they really shouldn't have been, so you should try to work on punctuation a bit.
On the flip side though, there were moments when you did really well on Sam, Dean and Bobby, and they were completely in character, and it was just flawless, so don't get discouraged! I really love almost everything you did here :D Those are the only two things I could say I didn't like, and they really didn't subtract too much at all from the overall flow of the story.
To end this, I just want to tell you again how talented I think you are, and how much I enjoyed this story! I can't wait for the sequel(If you decide to make one; I hope you do!), so keep up the good work!

so you are saying this isn't the end? not the last chapter? please don't let it be

Aw what a wonderful bittersweet ending! It seemed so peaceful and serene for Amara to have the cabin and a new lease on life but so sad and lonely that the people she cared about weren't there and she had no idea what happened to them. Of course, when Dean comes back from Purgatory, it is the cabin that he and Sam meet up at so... fingers crossed. Great job on this. Amara was a great character and you had a very interesting and thought-out plot.

Oh that was heartbreaking! To have her wake up just to lose her again. I hope he doesn't find out it was mostly the memories of what he did to her in Hell that made her withdraw again. So sorry about the delay in reading and reviewing - I am still trying to catch up with the updates over the past 2 weeks that I haven't had time to read. Off to read your next chapter now - I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read what others you have in the works.

so this wasn't the last chapter. one more left?! thanks

ok 1. i am glad this son of a bitch is finally gone and 2. she is in a coma again? she will wake up right, i mean god told her that she will live. thanks

Wow what an amazing climax! Good riddance to Tenebroin. That was a great chapter. I'm soooo glad Cas decided to help and at least heal the physical wounds. Hopefully he won't get in too much trouble for it. Hopefully also Amara's not stuck in a coma - that would be awful for Dean for her to stay like that. Awesome work - this part was so exciting.

Wow. This was a really great chapter! Will you please make more? It is the coolest thing I've ever read! Thank you so much! Hope you write another chapter!

LIbby

I loved your description of the 'Rainbow Man'. Nicely done. And just in time too for I doubt cas would have been able to save them all by himself. Great job with this story. I hope amara's okay and forgives herself, for Dean's sake as much as her own. Sorry for the late review - I have been behind on everything.