Reviews for Interloper
YourFan chapter 1 . 4/25
Loved the story ! Very well written!
When I first heard the name “Niniane”, I thought
that yep, only Luna would name her daughter
that .it was undoubtedly clear that Luna
was the girls like I already
mentioned I loved the story and it was even better than jk Rowlings epilogue. When I left my review I noticed some not so nice comments in your mind them ,they are probably jealous of your talent to write compelling and interesting stories.
Some of them might even be Ron and Hermione shippers who are threatened by Harry and Hermione til this day (even jk admitted later than harry&hermione were more well matched than ron and Hermione).
Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
I curse that day when I watched DH 1 and came across where Harry tells Ron, "I love her like a sister". It's unnecessary to say that after that I shut down the laptop.

Really? How Harry thinks that Hermione is like his sister when he doesn't have one? On the other hand he should have seen Ginny as his sister because she was the exact image of his mother.
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
Absolutely adored this, so well written! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2019
Suck a gun and pull the trigger, fucker.
tcl7189 chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
Nice!
kimjo2 chapter 1 . 3/5/2019
Great character study of Ron. Thanks
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
Very well though out story! I can easily see it as canon. Thank you for making Ron so believable, kind and showing his growth.
vampdreams chapter 1 . 10/30/2018
Loved it!
I too like Ron but can't see him with Hermione
So I really appreciate his treatment in the fic
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2018
Wish this had been canon... love this story. Ron’s maturity & Harry’s honesty
dude356 chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
I had Luna as Ron's wife at the end. I like that pairing. I also like Harry and Luna, Neville and Luna, Hermione and Luna, Ginny and Luna (the last two for femslash pairings, of course). I just love fanfic Luna.
Julia chapter 1 . 7/11/2018
Loved everything right up until the names...
NatashaJaniphil chapter 1 . 5/26/2018
Loved this.
TheLoteTree chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
Thank you for that short but sweet story. I like that you have written it from Ron's point of view and have tried to make him more mature instead of opting for Ron-bashing. However, I think the lack of aggression or at least lack of frustration Ron expresses when Harry reveals his love for Hermione is a little out of character for him. But yes I can see Ron eventually coming to terms with Harry and Hermione being together in the future. I also liked the fact that you made the story short and not overly sappy. The emotions were clear but not unnecessarily emphasised. I appreciate that. Good work, over all. : )
Crying chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
Omg... Yes! It never occurred to me this could happen, but it makes a lot of sense.
FuN FiFi chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
Great re-writing of that infamous "I love her like a sister..." scene! God only knows how an orphan like Harry would possibly understand what it's like to have a sister! *rolls eyes*

Anyway, I really enjoyed the way that you handled Ron's character development in your fic; most Harmony writers tend to butcher his character and it saddens me to read those stories. But your interpretation brings a breath of fresh air to such a lovable character! So I'm happy to have read a fantastic HHr story where Ron is actually kind of instrumental in bringing our hero and heroine together in the first place! :-)
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