This is hilarious.

lol! Their poor brains.

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Heeheehee! Thanks

For those of you who say Snape shouldn’t have been affected. His logic puzzle is actually from an older story. It’s entirely reasonable that halfblood snape could have read the puzzle before while in the muggle world but lost all sense of logic in the 20 years it’s been since he left and just plagiarized from his memories. He is a master At Occlumency so should be able to remember what he reads fairly easily even from the past.

Perfect.

Its pretty straightforward. Dumbledore can visit, but can't live there and be there too long.

this is amazing, i love it!

Hermione AND Snape have potter senses

Yes it’s a cover for very lazy and weak writing, only barely enough to satisfy children: after all most people do not act logically but their actions make perfect sense within the context of their personalities and circumstances (goals, fears, greed, desire, etc) , so it doesn’t really cover up any plot holes it just throws a weak glamour over them.

Her talent was in stealing concepts from other authors and stitching them together in a wonderfully anachronistic yet wondrous world, not in story telling, character building, or world building. (Why use a bloody train that requires staff and 12 hours, risking the statue of secrecy to gather 1000s of witches each year at kings cross when you can simply create a Floo station at hogsmeade, etc etc. The logic excuse would only satisfy people with IQs in the double digits, which includes most children. Everyone else would realize that logic or no logic you still go with the cheapest option and pocket the rest of the money unless you are forced to go with the expensive one, and even then there’s the huge risk and staff requirements to maintain the secrecy with idiot women yelling about platform, 9 3/4s whole carrying owls n shit)

As such I very much enjoyed this little logic snippet XD

However, you made a small logical mistake, lol, Snape CAN do logic as shown in the philosophers stone, hehe.

Nice story.

In my point of view, most of the adult wizards and witches in whole HP books are more careless and arrogant than the kids.

Awesome

You cant leave the story like that. You need to write another chapter. Please write another chapter

That's a fun one :) Thanks!

Nope. The narrativium demands there must be a weak spot to anything. And if there is logic, magic ceases to exist. Want that?
;-) greetings

Yeah... But you forgot that Hermione said that during first year because she was impressed that Snape put a logical trial instead of a magical one so why would he broke when confronted by logic ?