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Oh por dios ! Creo que me asuste mas que light ...fue muy divertido sigue así

LOL OMG I TOTALLY CAN IMAGINE SOICHIRO FEELS LIKE "WTF? What did you just say? I think I heard sexual activity." Then he found them naked with each other sperm. Great. Just great. You really are! Thank you for the story!

OH DEAR THAT WAS BAD

I loved this story! I hope you do a sequel! I feel bad for Light's father lol

my goooddd! please i am begging make the sequel, make them 'go alll the way'. I can't stop smiling to think the situation. Light's father found his perfect son did pervert thing. It must be awkward.

Faveeee

Lol so first of all I totally disagee with Light. We perverted girls LIVE ON YAOI! And I couldn't help but scream and yell "uh-oh" when Light and L had got caught xD

Yay, Light and L are out of the closet... physically and figuratively. *giggle*

u I love this. That was hilarious!

...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !

Dude, that ending may be... eh, rushed (innuendo, LOL)... but this could totally be a multi-chap story, puh-leeeease...!

The ending made laugh so hard that for like two minutes I wasnt making any noise and clapping my hands like a seal my parents looked at me like I had finally lost it so great ending

My friend sent me this email: "look up 'cranberry juice' on fanfiction, and tell me that is not something we would do to them"
She was absolutely right.
And this fic is hilarious.

LMFAO! NICE! I LOVE THIS STORY! And uh nice plan Sayu XD L/Light action is so amazing! :3 GO YAOI! XD

This was great. I especially loved the ending, it was funny.

Nooo,I'm scrolling right now looking for the nxt button to go to the second chapter! Please update, I love this story, especially the awkwardness tht is bound to arise from this