I love this story. It is my favorite elder scrolls fanfic. I love you as a writer.

I know it's a long shot after seeing the last time you updated, but I hope you keep this story going. it's pretty good so far.

Ah, I'm so sad to see that this hasn't been updated in a while. I only found it today. I wish I could help get this story going again but one, it's been a long time since the last author's note was posted so this story is probably abandoned and two, I suck at action too. I tend to get lost in tangents which kill any action I try to write. Still, this story was fantastic. I'm definitely saving this to my bookmarks.

Oh please oh please oh please, continue the story! I don’t care if the action scenes are short and scarce, the story is awesome in itself!

When do you plan to continue this story? It's really good and I want to read more, please don't be like others and let the good stories di.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Lovely

This is a wonderful story so far. I hope that it continues to be as good as it currently is

Are you still working on this, or has the story been abandoned?

Are you still working on this story and if so do you need any help? I read this one a few times now and really liked the direction you took with this crossover.

I'm not crying, I'm not crying, I'm not*INCONSOLABLE SOBBING*, OH GOD IT'S LION KING ALL OVER AGAIN!

Best Naruto/Elder Scrolls crossover I've ever seen.

Please return soon

looking forward to when you try to update again

You're looking for Fight scenes, huh? Well, while I can't help you see what i think, I may be able to give you some advice on the matter.

What you said about Fight scenes in Professional Novels is mostly true. But for some, it doesn't actually apply. I am of the latter category. For me, I use something I like to call a "Trance" to view the scenes. The Trance plays the voices, sounds them out in my head, the scenes play out in front of me. Every cut by a sword, every Muzzle flash from a gunshot, Every detail of a Fireball, it all plays out in front of me.

The Trance is an ability any Artist can make excellent use of. A writer can use it to see what's going on in their stories. A painter can see the image and, with practice perfect the image in their mind and Heart, putting it on the Canvas. Any Martial Artist should have heard of "Shadow Boxing". From what I can tell, Shadow Boxing uses the Trance, as well.

Have you ever read anyone else's works, and literally seen what was going on in the story right in front of you? Have you played a game, and then read a Fanfic regarding it, seeing the actual locations, the actual characters, acting out as the story progresses? Have you felt the Character's emotions as you read a story?

These are questions you need to ask yourself. If the answer to any of them are "Yes" then you have a slight Trance ability. Harnessing it can easily increase your writing ability. Take it from me. i had started writing a while back. I had a bit of trouble at first, I'll admit. I didn't know about the trance at the time. I discovered it later on, and then found out about fanfiction. I tried my hand at it, subsconsciously using the Trance. When I consciously use it, well if I still had any of those older works, you'd see a MAJOR difference. If you check my Fanfics on here, you'll see that most of them are extremely detailed. Look into my posted works, and see the quality. See if you can't see what I saw.

Send me a PM if you can see how it turned out. You could try "Holy Knight Ninja", as I can see you're familiar with the Naruto world.