This is the first fanfiction I have ever read for Orochimaru and Anko, but I'm glad I gave it a chance. You wrote this really well and I think I will now read some more fanfictions of these two.

GAH!this is job.

Adorei, você tão romântica e poética e também escreve muito bem! Sou brasileira!

This is lovely!

I don't really like the Orochimaru X Anko pairing much, but this is a sweet story. Oro isn't really the nostalgic type though, not as I see him...

It's sad, but I definitely like it. It shows Orochimaru having real emotion, but without seeming fluffy or fake. I also think your writing is improving. Not merely in its grammar, but the style. You're very descreptive and show clear, concrete images here. It gives a good picture of what's going and and makes it more relatable. If I have any complaints, it would be that I have read many an OroAnko fic where she's afraid of thunder and he comforts. It's not really a bad thing, as you did a good of it, but it is somewhat cliché. But it is a nice fic and you should be proud. Keep up your hard work writing. It is well worth it!

this is nice... . the thoughts of orochimaru about anko really fits... i mean, he doesn't sound out of character with all his thoughts, and that's a very good point about this story. though, i would kinda prefer it if the ending was not too abrupt... maybe some more contact between them at the end... it's just a suggestion though...

still,, this is one awesome fic, good job! .

Awww it's so sweet! Orochimaru is my favorite character and we have the same birthday so this was really awesome to read:)

AWWW! THIS IS SOO SWEET! :D Glad to see there are still OroAnko fans out there! :) Come visit the Odaxelagnia: The Anko x Orochimaru Fanclub sometime, if you want.

A few grammar mistakes here and there, but nice chapter nonetheless. :D

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LORD OROCHIMARU!

how sweet. mostly there are fics on him doing bad things but this one is nice for a change.

Happy Birthday, Orochimaru.