| Reviews for The Turning Tide |
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Rigel100 chapter 58 . 4/18/2018 Yep real love sucks. I can totally relate to that. Hope your muse comes back because I'd love to read the rest of your story. So I hope everything gets better for you. Because I'll stick to your story until I know the end. |
Micheal 13 chapter 58 . 4/17/2018 Sorry to hear that cat but as you said real life is so more wierder then any work of fiction. Glad to hear your still with us and hope you have a happy life, so keep up the good work and i am sure that a few of us will still be here when you find your muse again. |
Micheal 13 chapter 57 . 8/9/2017 So glad to see you back hopefully everything starts going up and right now for you. I myself have had a bad time and my muse has stopped. But keep up the good work and looking forward to more good stories. |
zealous specter chapter 56 . 9/15/2016 I so love this story and can't wait for you too get back to it. But I got a question about why Shea would need a male donor, when in canon it is possible and has been done with Miranda and her sister being created from one person's DNA. Our society can do it even now, well not now since it is still in the research stage. But in 2008 British scientists have discovered a way to turn female bone marrow into sperm, allowing women to reproduce without the need of male companionship. All Shea would need to do is get the research from earth, then get it to a genetic specialist(High chance it's a Salarian) to perfect it. Though all children born of this method would be female, due to the lack of the Y chromosomes, and there is high chance of birth defects. But this story take place in a SI-FI setting were designer babies(Mirandasister) are a thing, so defects would be a non-issue. Eggs also can be created from male bone marrow, but men looking to reproduce would still need to find a surrogate mother to handle the gestation period. If you do it this way then Shea wouldn't have to out live her kid, since all the DNA would be her's the child would in turn her longevity which she got. Also it would just be really sad. and that's it love the story and hope you get back to us soon :) |
Guest chapter 56 . 5/9/2016 Looking forward to the continuation of the story |
RED78910 chapter 56 . 4/5/2016 Glad to hear you are able to live your life freely. I hope all continues to go well for you, and that you can get back into writing soon. |
sherryE chapter 56 . 4/5/2016 Hey you go girl |
Micheal 13 chapter 56 . 4/5/2016 Wow you've been busy, glad to hear your not giving up on the story, I really like Shea and the family so dysfunctional it functions right. Take as long as you need or like I'm sure there are more then a few of us here who will wait for you to get your groove back. So keep up the good work and have fun doing it. |
Bigs-Post chapter 56 . 4/4/2016 Woooo your back ... Maybe hehehehehe. I'll be on the lookout for your next work, might have to reread it's been so long. Ps. Good for you for making life truly yours. |
Guest chapter 56 . 4/4/2016 Since you've been gone I have been re-reading this on & off and while I would like to say this is a great "beginning" to mass effect it appears at-least to me that now it's going "away" from the games into it's own world, alternate universe really with only mere mentions & interactions with the MASS EFFECT side of things I KNOW this takes well over a century BEFORE the trilogy but I think as one of your former followers you should compartmentalize or however you say it and just make the next few chapter's into a brief intro to the games (BEGINNING) (MIDDLE) (ENDING) if you will then straight into the primary reason you started this...mass effect UNLESS you are willing to do a complete reboot of your story and start over...just saying since...well... |
Rigel100 chapter 56 . 4/4/2016 Thanks for the message. As I'm a fan of your stories from the beginning I would have been disapointed not to see an ending to it. Hope to read à new chapter soon. |
magnusvictor chapter 47 . 11/28/2015 Dictation software is awesome: It has given us "Aria T'Loak, Queen of America." (Last paragraph, 3rd line) |
RED78910 chapter 55 . 8/17/2015 Glad to see you are still interested in writing. I truly hope all goes well for you in the future and that things end up working out. This was a very nice bit of fluff. Curious as to what comes next. Keep up the good work, and hang in there. |
Micheal 13 chapter 55 . 8/17/2015 OMG I was freaking worried that something had happened to you. I am so glad your back looking forward to seeing more from you. Also good luck in whatever you decide to do. Keep up the good work. |
Guest chapter 54 . 8/12/2015 Hang in there! You will meet your Lenea, since you said that you based Shea off of you (for the most part). :) Oh and pretty pretty pretty please update this story it is really really really awesome! |