This story was so well written and although I stumbled upon it by accident I loved every word. Amazing job!

you said could care less u nerd

this is good i like it. heart emoji.

Loved it. Wish I wrote as well as you do at your age (unless your bio lies, hahaha!) Not sure what "full version" you're referring to on your page, otherwise I'd go and read that too.
Also, the "Hana" mentioned in the story... don't you mean "Kana"? Just a little something to fix if it was a slip, otherwise I loved the fic :)

hmmm, this is really inspired and in-depth, i really like it :)

I must say, it's been a depressingly long time since I've read a really good fanfic. This was a very good read, which is, again, sadly something I don't normally see in writings, particularly about the Mabudachi trio. Your writing style was simple, yet I am a fan of the way you captured the subtleties in Sigure and Hatori's friendship. I really enjoyed this quote here:

"You should put on some gloves," Hatori continued. "Your circulation has always been terrible."

Shigure walked out of the room, tossing his lighter over his shoulder so it landed squarely on his friend's chest. "It's because my heart doesn't work, Hatori," he called lightly. "Haven't all my girlfriends told you this?"

Marvelous job. :D