Whew, what a surreal situation for Hakuba to go through. XD

absolutely awesome. I really like story like this. we need more. good job!

Impressive. Hakuba can actually be flexible and do what needs to be done. Who knew. You might even make me like him. Great plot.

This is beautiful

preternaturally competent children and kid skulking through the shadows helping out where he can, then casually swinging by to check on hakuba (SANS SHOES IM WHEEZING)? excellent. superb. 10/10

Brilliant story. I love Hakuba working with Conan. Kid popping up at the end was a nice added touch, I can imagine Kaito coming to the same conclusions at the same time as Hakuba in the classroom.

Hahaha, that was quit fun to read! Saguru so obediently agreeing with Conan and Haibara was awesome! Especially with him not knowing that they aren't real children.
Though when Conan entered Kaito's classroom I expected Conan to notice him or something like that. xD

wait, blamed his family for his kid?!

Conan and Ai surprised him, didn't they?

Kid keeps an eye on them, don't they?

This is amazing and descriptive. I feel bad for Hakuba though. Keep up the good work. You're an amazing writer.
-Neonkoi

This here? This is brilliant. You mold the Kid/Conan universe in the exact way that I always wanted to see it done - by which I mean Conan-Hakuba interactions, of which I've seen exactly one thus far in canon. Haibara is my favourite character and I love the way you included her in this - and Kaito, too. I don't know if you meant to parody canon or not, but it certainly *feels* that way in how incredibly business as usual this is for the three of them, and Saguru's resigned acceptance of Conan and Haibara's unique brand of precocious.

Really liked the character presentation and flow.

Oh I loved this. Haibara and Conan are awful at pretending to be children half the time...

I love everything about the fact that child kidnappers have absolutely no idea what they're in for if they target Conan and/or Haibara. (If you're familiar with Discworld, it kinda reminds me of the way that criminals looking to take a hostage often target the pretty blonde officer... and then are immediately educated as to who the werewolf in the Watch is XD).

Also of course Kid has bright pink duct tape. Of course.

As always, excellent writing. Thank you so much for SHOWING everything rather than explaining it all down to every last minute detail the characters may think of each other. I appreciate that you appreciate your readers enough not to spell everything out. Its what makes your writing so superb!