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IM SCARED! WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

*Scar'd for life o.0*
HELLLLP MOMMY

Carmel Link. Must taste delicious. Link covered in Carmel. He was already one of the sexist video game characters I've seen. I can imagine link covered in carmel.

Carmel link. Sounds tasty.

*is in a sugar-Yaoi induced coma*

Lovely story (: I'm started to really love these three together!

I loved this!