That was great, thanks for the pleasant read!

OOOOOOOHHHHH I found more! On to the next one! :D

Once again, brilliant. Another master piece.

Another great one. Your stories just seem so in tune with what we saw in the game. I can only hope you have many more ideas dancing in your head, eager to be put in "paper".

I never really thought of the Loyalist's point of view as they poisoned our hero, especially Trevor, who handed it off to Corvo. Really great story!

Wow, you're really talented (・ω・)

I read your other brilliant piece—I'll leave another review soon, was sick and tired when I read it—and I can't find words to fit your ability to write Pendleton. Wonderful? Awesome? I mentioned brilliant already, yes?

I see people dismis him as thoughtless, corrupt bad guy, ignoring the heart's whispers of his hard upbringing (with sadistic brothers and all), and the gold ingot that appears if you let his brothers—his tormentors—live. Patethic yes, but interesting. In this fic I think you do the character justice. One doesn't just *become* a poisonous liar. Noble or not, its the surroundings that shape a person. Adored how the name changed (PendletonTreavor) after the flashback(s), when with Corvo. Like it was very personal although it shouldn't really be. Deep regret, hidden?

Overall, I think this was a well-written piece! Excellent portrayal of Treavor Pendleton, which I hope to see more of, along with others in the vast Dishonored universe Thanks for writing this!

I hope my English wasn't too bad! (o)ゞ Sorry if I rambled, I'm gonna go sleep now tiredtiredtired

I really love how you explored this moment and dug into just what it meant for Pendleton. Your writing is exceptional!

Thank you for this! You're developing such good facets to characters that I quite loved in this game and it's amazing. I hope you do more!