In loved it.

cute

At times its a bit confusing when what happened. Like, with the flashbacks. When in the story did these events occur?

I lo 've this story! And I would love for a story on there kids.

That was so cute please make a sequel or something

That was so...Cute

Hello Ink-chan~! This was an amazing story! You have got to make a sequel where the twins are both 8 and everyone knows who their parents are. Then they should make a friend a lot like Masaomi and Mikado starts to feel concerned. Then they should find out that Akeni and Kaito's friend is Masaomi and Saki's son! Not to mention that Masaomi is back and wants revenge so he uses the Yellow Scarves! Then the whole thing should blow over, Masaomi learns the truth, apologized, gets partially forgiven, but still can't be around Mikado. That's when Kida should realize that he lost his best friend and leaves...

This story is amazing I read it twice now and I still can't stop reading over and over in the future . I wish u did a sequel talk about Mikado's best friend meet the twins and the parent with more action (that was his a suggestion)

PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! THIS WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD AND I CAN'T THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR WRITING THIS! I LOVE IT!

Same! Mpreg is easy to read for certain ships.

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Three plot problems! At the beginning, you said shizuo had lost his job. At the end, he suddenly had it back. Also, akemi has crazy strength. You are implying that she obtained this genetically from shizuo. But shizuo was not born strong. He just had a raging temper that made him try to throw things. It's actually addressed that he went to the hospital all the time growing up, because he ripped muscles and had other problems from overexerting himself. Aaaand, I forgot the third one, dammit. I know if was something in the last 2-3 chapters, though... Anyway, I really enjoyed this! Some things were unrealistic or moved too fast, but it was fun and emotionally gratifying, overall. Good job! *thumbs up

. It is so cute!

I was waiting for one of them to be Mikado and just give them 'the look' that makes them all shiver in fear.

Or in Shizu-chan and Izaya-chan's case, anticipation.

THIS WAS THE MOST CUTE, ADORABLE STORY IN EVER! wish that masaomi got part of the family but its ok as is I guess. YOU ARE A SUPER GENIUS FOR MAKING THIS STORY, IF ONLY THERE COULD BE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS, AND LOOONG, NOT SHORT ONE-SHOTS BUT GOOD LONG STORIES! I am a girl twin with a boy twin brother so this story touches my heart! TTvTT loved the story, and hope to read others like it!

Awww, that was so sweet. I love it.