Good your making me swoon

I really love the story! Aaaa so much drama.

I must say that this plot is a bit too depressing for me and rather shallow, but hey it's a fanfic you can do whatever you want :) interesting read so far

This so called sorry excuse of a “story” is stupid. Your Lily is a weak willed and makes the dumbest decisions. Your Severus Snape is weak as well. Lily doesn’t deserve him and he doesn’t deserve Lily. Severus never truly loved her and his love is more of an obsession than anything else. He should move on with his life since he’s not an death eater and fine someone that truly loves him back and puts him first and vice versa.

His “relationship” with Lily is unhealthy and she doesn’t truly love him. It is never the victims fault. But Every decision Lily makes once she finds out who James is, is so dumb. Let Severus and her parents help her and then go to the authorities (Aurors). Submit for testing with veritaserum and submit her memories for review. She has physical proof on her body that he abuses her. I get that she wants to protect her family but the way she’s doing it is not the way to go.

She could have told Severus and he could have taken her parents and Petunia away to a safe location (his home) and the warded it from James and Sirius. He could have then immediately apparated himself and Lily to the Auror department and have her tested for any outside influences. Yes, I get that she wasn’t think because she was afraid and fear makes us to very stupid things but it was also stupid of her to let herself become a martyr.

This is not worth reading and I regret that I have gotten this far.

James was horribly ooc. As a proud Jily fan, I really did not like this at all. Snape never respected or loved Lily the way James did. I hate Snapefen.

You make James potter sound like a sicopath; they cant love. But they also cant have meaningful friendships, only have friends they can use, and james seems close to sirius

I know you've finished with this story but if you write a HP fic in the future/are working on one right now then you should know: it's illegal for a witch/wizard to hurt or kill a muggle. They would either go to azkaban for life or get the Dementor's Kiss

Severus was right to not tell Lily about his flashback-she would be sure to find some way that it was his fault that the Marauders jumped him.

what the fuck.

Lily thinks about Remus rather too much. But Severus has a cure for that.

It would be so nice if Remus would ever actually *do* something to show his gratitude for the new potion, but he's gone all his life without having to ever do anything but be a victim, sigh.

Terrible storyline.

I'm sure Remus is going to regret accepting Dumbledore's help eventually, but as ever, he's a professional victim and really doesn't know how to stand on his own two feet. Here's hoping he *remembers* to go to the Shack during his transformations. His safety record is not a good one.

As for Severus, he deserves to have Lily look after him for once instead of her having half the Order staying over.

Sigh. Lily is still putting Remus ahead of Severus. But I guess that's the way she's always going to be.

But of course her dear Gryffindor friends will always come before Severus-he ought to know that by now. But of course he will always forgive Lily, no matter how crappy she treats him.