Reviews for To Build A World
FiberBard chapter 10 . 8/22/2019
This was a good wrap up. The time skips were fairly smooth and easy to follow, and it was great to have a happy ending with a hint of positive change for the future.

An original story based on both of those would be interesting. Go for it! _
kikix chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
I read this for the first time about 5 years ago, and now I've re read it all it's just as good as I remembered! thank you so much for finishing it, and the way you ended it was beautiful. honestly this is my favourite fanfiction and better than so many other published books I've read!
Hixaf chapter 10 . 4/16/2018
Thank god for this shitty fanfiction who made the oc totally op and mary-sue BYE
Kali-blue chapter 9 . 9/20/2017
I enjoyed your story and appreciate that you finished it after taking an hiatus. The Dursley's reimagined was done well; and having a magically daughter who was gifted and astute when her family and Harry were worlds apart in attitude, aptitude and behavior made for a credible read. Thanks, Kali
CarpeDiemMay chapter 10 . 8/8/2017
this was beautiful. i cried at the end as i always do when there is the obituary. but it was absolutely beautiful and i have no complaints. you didnt drag it on as some authors do and you didnt cut if off abruptly or end up not finishing it as some do due to conflicting schedules or loss of interest. i am highly impressed and envious, i wish i could write as well as you have written this. unfortunately i can never quite get my stories right and give up.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/28/2017
I love your stories.
creativesm75 chapter 10 . 1/23/2017
very good
bookgirl113 chapter 7 . 12/11/2016
Damn, Roisin would be a great Prime Minister. I love them all, Dumbledore's an idiot, I miss the O'Connor clan and the younger years of the story (although I wouldn't change anything), Cedric is sweet, and I can't think of everything else I want to say so I'll stick with this.
bookgirl113 chapter 6 . 12/11/2016
Seriously, how on EARTH is Dumbledore STILL in charge of the school, ESPECIALLY after the bs with Snape?! And why does the Ministry INSIST on being terrible when they could easily just not be?
bookgirl113 chapter 4 . 12/11/2016
This is all so sweet and cute and perfect and *cue extreme fangirling* awwwwwww
bookgirl113 chapter 3 . 12/11/2016
Go Roisin!
Fast Frank chapter 3 . 11/9/2016
The great problem in writing serious HP based fics is dealing with things JKR put in canon because she thought them "cute" (case in point, a ghost teaching history).
maartenvervloet chapter 9 . 6/23/2016
All by all, this chapter does conclude the story quite well; I suppose I would have preferred to have a few chapters in between 7 and 8, but I can understand why you didn't.
licha.s chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
Thanks for making an epilogue (sorry for writing in the wrong chapter though) great story!
Natalie chapter 10 . 4/19/2016
Omg I can't believe u left it like that I loved both story's and am a little disappointed but I fully understand the problems hun and wish u the best for the future
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