Very good.

Hi! I saw that you write some Alex Rider and I thought, hey, I like Alex, let's check that out!

And I am very glad I did. This is a very well written story (particularly for a first story!) and it was both heartfelt and engaging, which are two things I really like in stories. All six thumbs up! :)

Can you write a story to this with the before and after this one-shot, with who they are, what they want - even though we know this! - and where all the students are as well as Alex being the awesome spy we all know and saving the day - either with the school finding out or not and Alex being the secret hero - PLEASE! I would DIE for it! Can't wait to hear back!

Thanks and sorry for bothering you - ignore me if you don't want to - I take no offence!
-ByeBye!

I think I'm a sadist.
This made me happy.

AMAZING make it an entire story pretty please?!

One word. Awesome.

Cool! So, did Alex die in the end or what?

Awesome! I love all the action and drama you managed to condense into less than a thousand words. That's definitely quite the gift. And the last line? Pure Alex Rider. Your tone was dead on, finishing off a great story with a beautifully done, straight-to-the-point line. I hope you get tons of reviews and hope to continue writing here!

I'll also note, though you can ignore this, that your segment here sounds to me less like a one-shot and more of a story opener or prologue... *cough cough* Take that as you will. :]

Awesome! Much better than before like the way you changed it to a second story drop. Ummm... Oh yer and You have to keep writing this, follow on. Thats all. Awesome story.

AMAZING!

Good, the ending was funny.

That was awesome