That my good sir was excellent

Love it!

I really liked this! I love it! Are you writing anything like that which Luffy good dancer? Please?

I thought it was interesting. A little dull, but interesting. The reason why it was dull is because the story didn't make sense in a way. It was interesting to find out that Luffy could dance, but when I first read the title I thought it was something else. Not him dancing, but maybe talking to his dead brother and crying a little and the crew finds out and try to comfort him the next day. I thought it would be something like that. How he tells Ace all about the days events every night. It seemed to be at least an interesting idea, but did not expect it. The bolded statements when they talk is helpful to follow along easily. The information put into it was well done and easy to imagine. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Oh, I thought the woman was Boa Hancock. Any-who, SUPA story! XD

You don't like it? But I love it! Well, thank you for publishing this! I've been awaiting toread a fic about Luffy can dance! (or sing) Hebat!
-Koyuki, the original.

Loved it- great job'