well thanks for the read

Great!

You contradict yourself in this chapter. Cho says he had not eaten in so long he almost passed out, which indicates he was very weak. Then you say he damn near drug me out of the house. He can't be weak and strong at the same time.

Im really looking forward to read more! I think that's a plot I haven't read anywhere else before.

like the start and will love to see more...great story

Sounds interesting.

More please! ;) And longer chapters would be ace ;)