I can't understand anything aaarrrrggghh!

sugoii!

please go on!

great!

nooo! please continue! this story is really beautiful! it has a great plot(as expected from the author) and a very unique way of writing. just because you have a different style in writing, doesn't mean you sucked, right? please don't belittle yourself because you have a great potential! I promise that I will continue to review your story! please don't be discouraged, ne!

I totally understand water with ice - juvia,gray. Book with metal - levy,gajeel and the rest when they get together the spell is broken. U shouldve carried on!

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooh

It's pretty good, but um it's still pretty hard to read, there's so little of it and there are some mistakes there to watch out for...it's still pretty good though.

WAAAAT

I don't understand a thing...

you should seperate some lines 'cause it's confusing when someone reads them...

try to separate some lines it's making me dizzy but anyways it's nice

ooooh

Could you space out your text and put more detail in this story? Also Im slightly confused by this whole thing...could you explain better?

Um his names Jellal, but u pronounce it gerrar. U sholud space this out more. Like when there talking space it, that makes it easier to read. Keep it up this is a great story!