Haha, back off, Ray. Winry's taken.

change betrothed to fiance, and it'll be perfect. he wouldn't say betrothed.

This is awesome, but I just can't see Ed saying betrothed. I still love it though, thank you!

hahaha
I love it!

The outsider POV worked great! I always think it's really interesting to see characters through a different set of eyes. Plus the situation as a whole was adorable. :)

Nice work!
quintilis

oooooo this is nice and suspenseful just like i like it... this is why you are on of my favorite authors!

Heheheh... I like this! Poor Ray, he must be thinking "Why me..." XD Good job!

Poor Ray. Lol, I thought that said Roy at first. Was kinda worried about the Colonel, seeing as Ed is so protective.

OH! Do another chapter please! I usually don't like to read EdWin, but I love this!

Ha ha ha poor Ray!

Oh Ray all I can say to you is "ha—ha!" A la Nelson Muntz. Nice story BTW.

XD

Sorry, Ray. You don't stand a chance! :D