Good job for your first multi chapter story. Sweet and angsty - just how I like Royai. One thing though the word isn't unconscience but unconscious. Thanks for sharing.

This was simply amazing. It brought me to tears so many times. Excellent work. I loved it.

awwwww dang who put onions in here?-sniffles- i loved this story :):)

Hey Callie- oops! Sorry! Meant Abilene (HA! Finally spelled it right! I'll try to remember it) I really liked this fic. It wasn't an epic adventure, it wasn't an AU with EVERY FREAKING CHARACTER IN THE WORLD GOING TO HOGWARTS (Yesh, that would be ME!) it was a love story between two people who loved each other but would never admit it until a near death experience reminds them that life WILL end. That was what made it work. it was simple, in a good way. It was beautiful. And text me, DANGIT! So I can FANGIRL with you! BLESS YOUR FACE, SNICKERDOODLES AND KITTENS AND FREAKING YUI AWESOMENESS FOR EVERYONE (This is my online personality. It's a little weird)

This is SOO SOOO SWEET! T.T It was so romantic, I loved it so much! I'm checking out you deviantART page ;)

X'D IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL! OH I LOVE IT! X'D BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL!

Vary nice job rapping It up. The end was short but sweet and I was vary pleased with the way you rote it. I agree that should end it where you instead of forcing an extra chapter out of it. Your writhing has a kind of rhythm to it that as I've mentioned before sounds quite poetic. The poetic nature was less pronounced In this last chapter but the rhythm was definitely still there. Also you did a very good job keeping everyone in caricature. So my finale review, you did a vary good job with the hole story and I enjoyed It quite a lot.

Oh please please update soon! The way you write your story and pace it all is so creative and natural and I just couldn't stop once I found this! Please update c:

that was beautiful. vary poetic vary pleasant to read. you are write it did come out well. I hope you post more soon.

Writ more soon! i am hanging, just waiting to see that alert email in my inbox every day! your writing does not disappoint!

you are doing great! way better than i am... so keep up the good work!

that was hardly along time compared to the month long brakes of other writers... not that I'm complaining! this was a VARY good chapter and I hope to read more soon

Please continue! I'm very much looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

vary nice and vary poetic as well. please update soon(:

Hurry! Hurry! I love your work and can't wait for more!