Interesting.

The Peredhel's eyes are grey. And I like the name for Maglor-and of course I love the Fëanárians. Who doesn't?

Elrond and Elros' eyes are grey :)
If you do ever write that longer one, I'll be happy to read it.

Oh, this is so ADORABLE! P.S Elrond and Elros' eyes are canonically grey, but I like the idea of them being green better. Is it just me or is almost every elf's eyes grey? It's nice to think that maybe that's something they inherited from their human side. OH MY GOD! COULD HARRY BE A DESCENDANT OF THE PEREDHEL? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUT THAT IN YOUR LONGER STORY THX BYE

I really love this. Your other one was good too! I do hope you continue this.

I would absolutely love more of this. Honestly. I really, really hope you will one day get to writing this into a longer story…

Awesome! Harry's better off being raised by Maglor or Maedhros! They at least know how to raise a child right! They raised Elrond and Elros after all. This way Harry will be raised with love and maybe Maglor can heal...

OH WOW THIS IS COOL!

This was cute. Just a few little details I wanted to mention:
1) Elrond and Elros have grey eyes. I believe this is mentioned somewhere in Tolkien's stories, but I can't recall where.
2) Elven grammar usually has adjectives follow the nouns they modify, so the correct form seems to be 'pen tithen.' But my dictionary isn't complete, and fanfic authors have different sources for their Elvish translations.
Still, I enjoyed this little one-shot. I hope you do decide to continue this story.
Cynthia

An interesting and adorable little read ;) I enjoyed it.

This is so adorable!

-Aila

Another moving short story and for it I give you: one golden star.

Hope to see more of your work one day soon.

The Crimson Mage.