It's funny how the whole story Trump told him was...about Jizabel, the hero, but the poor guy never really realizes it, huh? And the bad man in the story is a similie to Alexis, basically.

This is really good. I enjoyed it a lot! Thank you for writing something so wonderful! :)

That...has got to be the most beautiful description of Jizabel and Cassian's story I have ever heard. It gave me ,heh for lack of a better reaction, goosebumps and a smile on my face.

Ahh that was lovely and the symbolism worked so very well; the way Cassian told that story was perfect. Also I liked that Jizabel had that moment of sensing that Cassian wasn't really a child. And it's always so exciting to find that you've written more ;3;

Little Jizabel is so innocent and adorable! I'm curious to see what this Trump tells him!

This is awesome! Wow...amazing. I like the idea of this already. The characterization is just lovely, and...wow. I'm in awe. Update soon! :)