She really is something in a dress! This was a really cute story!

You have a beautiful writing style and I look forward to reading more of your work! Great job on this story - thank you for sharing!

great story XD

Love this little "sneak peak" into how you think episode 5x04 will go! Very well-done!

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"She hums a honey-soaked sigh into his chest in affirmation and he grins..." Putting it here too because you're a picky motherfucker.

"...the architecture of her bones." I maintain the position that this isn't FUCKING FAIR.

"He is the tide, the full moon of her face his captor." I hope you're happy. Now that you're choosing this.

"'Sorry. We can talk about it in the morning. Sleep.'" Can we just talk about how much you suck because he's sitting there in the middle of the night SO EXCITED TO JUST BE WITH HER AND HE HAS ALL THESE IDEAS AND ALL THESE THINGS HE WANTS TO DO WITH HER AND HE'S JUST THROWING THEM OUT THERE AT GOD KNOWS WHAT HOUR BECAUSE HE LOVES HER? Can we?

"He hacks a cough, grips the edge of the counter and screws his eyes shut, concentrates on breathing." I love this and I don't know why but I hate you.

"'You do just want to take me away someplace where we can have sex without worrying about being interrupted.'" You goddamn queen.

"'You want to try again?'" Sadist.

"... imagines the ticker tape of his vision..." I had to google this and that's fucking cool, you infidel.

"... the black of her lashes..." I have noticed that you really like describing her lashes I HAVE CAUGHT YOU SURRENDER NOW OR EXECUTION.

"Sometimes she thinks about all the times he must have wanted to touch her, all the ways he makes up for it now." Your practices are inhumane.

"...her toes tracing over his bare feet." Knave.

"'Castle, did you hear that? We might see dolphins today.'" You are adorable. Beckett, not you. You're just cruel.

"He knows, the bastard..." I'm sorry, were you describing yourself? Of course you would. Fucking Mary Sue.

"A body in the pool. Of course." Now they know how I feel when I read your fic, toad.

Okay so I admit I'm a lazy reviewer, but how could I not post a review for this? This was amazing. Seriously, "the leaves of night falling around her feet" was absolutely gorgeous. I read and reread that one part about five times and there is so much good writing here. Just, so good. I have no words.

I cannot wait to read more.

JJ

How can this be a 'one-shot'? More please!

Very very well done. Really great. I love the details you add: both your own and from spoilers.

Love this. Amazing.

Sat here waiting for my castle download and I don't know whether its because I'm exhausted but I can't stop laughing I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU
also Kate and dolphins wahahshdjj perf

"... oh God oh Castle oh-

yes-

That."

Hehe, so good!

Dead body, well why not. Love the dialogue!

Very very cool - Hope Am and company, let us see all this sort of fun stuff first.

That was fun and done with class. Enjoyed it. You had me laughing out loud with the last three sentences. Well done.