Wow. Just wow. This is amazing and heartbreaking and... the word really is just wow.

I'm a little bit confused

beautiful

I wish there was a chapter 2.

Wow. Just wow. This was powerful.

Sweet mage of angst!
This is amazing! My feels! They all over the place! Great work.

Your such a great writer! I have no idea what to say to that other than just: woah. And: poor Dick...

Why?! My heart is in little tiny pieces all over the universe... Masterfully written and I want to hug you and punch you at the same time... You are a very good writer. Good flow. Character is very believable. Wonderfully done. I truly look forward to what else you have written. I hope I one day see a sequel to this from others' points of view. Hope, but won't push. Thanks for writing and posting this! And don't stories always seem to take a life of their own completely different from what one originally intends?

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Wow. What do I say to that?
It was good. Really good.

I have no other words but WOW.

Thats some serious angst.

Very touching and I feel like this would be true. It must hurt to go through all of that like a good little bat. :/

That was darkly beautiful.

i love this so much.. and its sorta depressing and im getting teary-eyed and and, it beautiful. im not typing properly.:)

TT I like it. It's kinda depressin, but that just makes it better. TuT