That was artful at its absolute best! I love it!

First of all, I just want to say how funny I think it is that Maiko and Smellershot are the only couples I ship in ATLA, so it seems you've got shipping down right (at least in my opinion ;)

noooo! this killed me! the feels!

Okay, I didn't need my heart anyway. I loved the part about the stars as I am writing a story along the same line. I think that they know something we don't. Wonderful job!

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Awww that was so sad. Yet at the same time it was so sweet. Great work very well written.

Heartbreaking, but perfect. I loved the characterization, the dynamic between them. It was completely believable and really sucked me into the story. Very, very well written; wow, the descriptions! Beautiful, especially the stars-and-kiss scene. Great work!

Bittersweet. Literally crying right now.

That's too sweet...you made me fall in love with Smellershot. Now I'm gonna read more Smellershot fics :)

You're a really good writer. I love it :D

That was so wonderful...Really, like wanting to cry right now.. This is one of the best smellershot stories i have read! Thank you so much! I really hope that you continue smellershot week! Amazing!