Ha! Good ole Leopold and poor Karliah xD Of course Sanguine is satisfied with all this.

Is it just me or was Mercer about to read Nal's secret stash of fanfiction?

LOL. I wonder which deadra she's talking about xD

I loved that! OMG I DYING FROM LAUGHTER!

*whispers* so if someone ate the sweetrolls would they become dragonborn?
Also: Leopold the dragon is best dragon! XD best skyrim crack read so far!

*snorts* very amusing and you get bonus points for 'griseous', now I can't get that word out of my head.

Seriously, I thank you for a funny and entertaining read. I love/hate your OC and Mercer is well played.

Oh dear god, if you don't right more of this type of wonderful lunacy, I shall cry my eyeballs out. One of the best reads I've found yet.

Oh, my god. That is just... I still can't stop laughing. What the HELL? How did you come up with it? I still haven't stopped laughing, for goodness sakes... I have to write this while laughing!

And why is it M-rated anyway?

Oh my- What? Even Sheogorath couldn't- WHAT THE FUCK? Oh my - Just, just, no. Sanguine, damn it, YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO TAKE OVER SHEOGORATH'S ACTIONS!

This story Win. I LOVE how in character Mercer Frey is. Very well written!

I am in love with your story. :) Seriously hilarious. I love the whole dysfunctional Dragonborn thing and I do love Mercer. Heiwako has written some great Mercer/Maven pairings and they completely work for me.

I have a DB that minds me of yours here: Twee. A dark elf, completely oversexed, utterly unaware of how other people think of her, rather self-absorbed. So when I read this story I could definitely see my Twee in it.

Just completely wonderful. :)

i have to ask: is "Sondryn" Nal's last name or is it like her nickname? I LOVE all your Mercer/Nal stories by the way; hope you do more of them in the future!

i can't stop laughing.

i do wonder if you are going to do another one like this but with different people. this one had me laughing so hard i swear i almost cried. *grins*

This was beyond hilarious. I laughed myself nearly to tears at Karliah's perpetual waiting, and especially at the end when she ended up tracking them down, only to flee when they went to attack her. Your sense of humor is very witty and enjoyable to read. Fantastic job with this story.