Really amazing. I like it , I searched for something like this so long and here I find it, Happy
Hope you write more
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great story.

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

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Yaay! That was fun. : D Well-written and good character interaction, which is the sticking point for me : ) You should write more stories. Especially those originals you've told me about ; )

This is an excellent piece of writing. Well done. *adds to favorites*

A very well-written story that is a delight to read :) Liked the action, especially seeing the interaction between student and master, as they work together. Those sake jug traps xD
Overall, a nice read on a boring rainy day :)

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This is one of my favorite fanfics now. I laughed so hard. You nailed Hiko's character. love it!

Fantastic story! Love the dynamics between master & student. Good, old, irritable Hiko and the vicious, mischief-making Kenshin. Lol - the fire scene was hilarious!

I do think that Kenshin was a little over the top...but I love that side of him as much as I love his peaceful side, so I really have to admit, I didn't mind. I don't see him ever not at least objecting to someone's death if he can help it, but I also love how you explained how he acted and why. All in all, I quite enjoyed this. :D Thanks for the read.

This was a very interesting read. Nice use of the connection concept, by the way. It was quite intriguing and very well used- yes I know I said it twice. It merits a relaxing reread from me in the future.

Shadow

"His little make-believe world at the dojo" XDXD

Oh I loved it! I'm faving this!

-Cloudy

Very good story, I loved the teasing scean! Kenshin is soo cute in this!

AWW! Hiko/Kenshin Father/Son moment! How cute! 0