Reviews for Daddy's Girl
Sephykoi chapter 4 . 2/19/2014
This...just... Ugh... UGH, my ovaries. They exploded in happiness. I love this series of stories. I wouldn't mind at ALL if you were to write more. They are just soo... adorable. Just like the feels I get from your Wrex/femShep ones. D I'd do a keyboard smash, but I have to finish up some calibrations. xD
HinataElyonToph chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
Aww I love this story. I really can't wait to see Garrus' reaction when she goes on her first date XD

"You listen here, kid, and you listen good. That woman you're taking out on a date? That's my little girl. She means the whole damn universe to me, so you better as hell treat her right. If she comes home in tears because you broke her heart, or if any hair on her head is out of place, you're going to find a little red dot on your forehead. You watch it, you hear me."

"Uhh...y-yes sir, Mr. Vakarian."

"Daaaaaaad, don't scare him away!"
Salmon Center chapter 4 . 9/17/2013
This fic is so precious. Not to mention, well-written. I also think you got the Shep and Garrus dynamics so right, completely nailed what they would be like. A balance of domestic and badass. The two of them just pull it off so well.

I hope you do another chapter (or two, or three... or forever) of the daughter being younger because Garrus as a father melts my heart. A first boyfriend and a marriage one (separate hopefully) would be lovely as well. More power to you and your writing!
FireEnchantress chapter 4 . 9/16/2013
Nice story thus far :) seeing Garrus in a domestic setting is quite different from normal, but just as sexy.
DearChibico chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
Ooh this brings on the tears 3 very adorably written story
geoavenger chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
Adorable. I can so see Garrus as a Dad!
PancakeLove chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
Shakarian babies makes any story worthwhile!
luna.shepard.3 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
This was a great story! I loved it! Please continue.
sir omes chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
3 this is exactly what i needed to feel better after reading Videotape (which i loved btw, don't get me wrong, but AGH my heart).
Suilven chapter 4 . 4/6/2013
"I really have to stop leaving you and your mother alone together if she's gonna teach you to talk like that." Maya chuckled weakly and didn't resist at all when Garrus had her lay back down. He brushed a few stray locks of sweaty hair from her forehead and wiped her hot skin with a wet washcloth. Hopefully the medication would help her sleep and break the fever that was burning her up.

Her eyes were closed and she was half out of it when she said, "You didn't answer me."

Garrus sighed and straightened her blankets while he thought about what he was going to say. "Even if you were throwing up on me, I'd still want to be here until you felt better. I'm your father, Maya, and I love you.""

Aw, I adore everything about dad!Garrus, and this chapter was no exception. Adorable and lovely.
FunnyLittleMe chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Awwww, adorabubble
CyanB chapter 4 . 4/3/2013
"What the hell are you talking about? You're her real father.", shows just how much Pelenaeus accepts Maya. Lovely two sentences.

I adore the last sentence, it made me laugh, too.
Mordinette chapter 4 . 4/3/2013
Lovely chapter. Maya is very lucky to have such a wonderful father. You've explored their changing relationship through the years so well. It was also nice to read how warmly Maya had been accepted into the turian side of the family.

As for the comment below about the 102 degree fever, the boiling point of water is 100 degrees Celsius and 212 degrees Fahrenheit. I think it's pretty obvious that the author meant that Maya's temperature was 102 degrees Fahrenheit, which is about 39 degrees C. Also, why would she have used Kelvin or something else? The number had to be based on a temperature scale that readers can relate to. Yes, maybe they will use some different scale in the future; for all we know they would use salarian googlybook, but unless something like that has been established in the ME lore it would just be confusing to the readers. - Just my 2 cents.
TW6464 chapter 4 . 4/3/2013
What a good chapter! I loved reading it!
barbex chapter 4 . 4/2/2013
aawwww

That was wonderful.
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