plz update

I love itttt

Nic

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Good story, interesting so far and I only request that you only bash Sasuke, Danzo, Orochimaru, Kabuto, Tobi(Obito, Madara, whoever you make him as really), and the CIVILIAN council and NOT Sakura or any of the rookies...Please, I have read way too many bash fics that revolve around that and COMPLETELY avoid the real evils-see above list-and FAR too many Sakura haters to just even be fair or logical...Please-Oh, and the footloose comment is either from the Movie dance version-Can't think of the name to save me-or you decided to just the use the song Footloose-Which I love:)-to be specific, "Everybody kick off your Sundays and just cut loose, everybody Footloose!"-may not be exact, but ya that version:)...Please reply if I can get and OC and your opinions on my bash-rant above:)

Time for a council beat down xD. This will be fun. Oh that was a low blow, poor Naruto. Bwhahah tsu-chan's post card. Bwhahaha holy shit, that's a lot of beeping. I wanna see footloose . Kyhahaha danzo is his bitch lulz. Hahaha nice some uzumaki still alive. Look at tha first day in power and already got konoha a new clan. Gaaaah moar plz.

XD let's give this a go. OH god iruka gonna so hate himself Xd. Naruto was right though, it's not like kono can actually beat sarutobi in a fight. That's a lot of S' XD. Kyhahaha he gonna remove sasgay's clan statues. I liked it. You have a lot of competition considering there is that "Naruto becomes the fifth" story by traban16 or something. But if you update and keep doing your own thing, you might develop a nice following. It was short and rather simple, but I enjoyed it.

liked it till op oce came in dont get me wrong might still be good fic but op oc's kind of kill lot of fics so i try not to read them good luck on this one.

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First off, love the story. Second, that's the Elder Swear from Potter Puppet Pals: Wizard Swears.

How to make this better: don't discontinue the story. Due to the starting of the fic, I'm kinda guessing this may be a humor genre? Makes me wonder if news will spreasd of how Naruto defeated the Sandaime.

nice theory