I agree with what you said in the opening author's note about how the A&O FanFics are starting to go way too far from the movie. Some of the stories here are hardly even related to the characters and can scarcely be classified as FanFiction! So in that mindset, I thank you for sticking to what happened and what was presented to us in the movie! There are very few writers that keep stories 100% accurate with what we saw. :-)

I really loved how this story gave us insight and reasons for what happened in the final scene. It was like a universally significant character holding everything together from behind the scenes or something! LOL! In short, it was amazing! I think I'll favorite it now. :D

Thanks again for sticking to the movie... I don't know if I can stress how thankful I am for you doing that with this story. It's really rare! :')

Humphrey Loves Kate

Wow! That was great! I always did wonder what exactly made Humphrey come back... You did a great job at seeing into the situation and proposing a highly probable theory. I love it when people do that! :D

And now to see how this wraps up...

Humphrey Loves Kate

Nice ending..
Keep it up bro.

nice!

Great story dawn, keep it up! It was cool of Winston to induct Sebastian into the now united pack. His life will be better for it. Just curious dawn are ya gonna make a sequel to this story? Please let me know.

Loved the slapping bit i added a needed sense of humor...i think

I love this story, but I know what happens Kate and Humphrey become mates. By the way when will you update Toutrered with love?

nice man

Great start and chapter dawn, keep it up! Cool interpretation of when Humphery went to get on the train. Instead of Humphery havin a vision of sorts, you had him meet another lone wolf in Sebastian, that gave him a reality check and convinced him to go to Kate. Wonder if Sebastian will get there in time to warn the now united pack about the impendin stampede before anyone gets caught in it like Tony and Winston did or get hurt like Kate and Humphery did? Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it

Nice story so far, It was great to show what you think happened on the train when he go on, because in the movie, after he jumps on, it cuts off the scene, and next thing you know, he's back. Great job so far!