Great fic :)

This was a brilliant and very enjoyable read. I enjoyed it so much I was sad to reach the end of it. I know it has been a very long time since you have written this, but thank you for writing it! :)

Sweet. Really sweet.

I loved the scene with Obi-Wan teaching Younglings! I think it makes sense that whenever he's at the Temple he would be teaching. And it definitely seems from the scene in AotC where he's with Yoda and the Youngling Bear Clan that he's around the Younglings a lot whenever he has time... and Obi-Wan with kids is just so D'AWWWW! BEYOND ADORABLE! :-D

aw, that was such a good, heartfelt story! so sad qui-gon would not be there for obi-wan's knighting...

A very touching story. Obi-Wan would indeed be a very personal teacher and you show his and Qui-Gon's differing personalities perfectly. And yet, somehow, those two as a team works and is balancing rather than detrimental. I suppose because both of them want their relationship to stay alive. As always, upbeat and optimistic ending.

NO NO! It wasn't boring! I loved it!

It was NOT boring. Why do people think action is the only way to make a story enjoyable?

Aw. That's so sweet! :D

aw this is so cute!

u said it was boring! it was not! i really liked it. write something else like this. it was very good.

excuse me but it wasnt boring. it was sweet and cheery and i thank you. it put a much needed smile on my face and i bet it did the same for other people too.

You write emotions very well. I especially like the way you show the evolution of a relationship-ups and downs, backwards and forwards. Nothing is ever static in life or in your stories. Well done!

It is all your fault that I have not slept in days. :P But seriously, your story "Cherish Every Moment" is one of your best fictions. I am glad I saved it for last. I do hope you are blessed with a chance to publish your own works and may they be as thoughtful and sincere. A word of caution, your spelling may want to improve a little. But that is a rare problem, you have the ability to develop plot as well as character and that by far is more important than two or three typos. I do like your character interaction best. When can we expect a new fiction?

It wasn't boring at all! I loved it, just like I love all of your stories. Plus I'm looking forward to all these longer fics you claim to be writing! *grin* I can't wait 'til you let us read those!