And to think... XD
Yes, I know that laughing emoticon thing has no place here, but trust me I need it. This made me sad, and Falco isn't my least nor my favorite character and guess what you do? You make him die. My reaction: D8 *explodes into dust*
Wait...wait a second...wait a /second/! Why did I put that laughing emoticon there, in the first place?!
Oh, what the crud. Whatever. If this story went any deeper, you, RainbowKandiKorn22, would succeed in making me cry. Applause!
Though it's not really /that/ hard to make me cry, I still feel this is a great peace of work.
And... FALCO IS A GHOST! D8! ...Yay? No clue.
I know this is the end, but I hope Fox feels better. If you guys treat and sort of have empathy with/for the characters like I do, I think you'll know what I mean.

Oh...my...wow.

Second Fanfic today that made me REEEALLLY sad. The first was a songfic about letting go a Pokemon, and now one of my favorite video game characters of all time commit SUICIDE?! Geez, and to think, my day was pretty decent! Not anymore, I guess!

I just hate it whenever people flame the more recent SSB characters, like Meta Knight, King Dedede, Toon Link, and of course, Falco. (And Wolf too, of course.) Falco's actually my favorite character to play as too! And granted, I'm not the biggest fan of some characters that are more new, like Olimar and Mr. Game and Watch, but I get why some people like certain characters and stuff. This is my opinion of course, but I just needed to rant about all that. I'm just sick of those who critique characters without considering why some people like playing as him/her.

And this was again, truly tragic. This could also be related to cyber-bullying, in a way, and what could happen if someone finds mean comments about them online for the world to see. Just how wrong it is...

Give Falco some love, guys. Please. He's one of the only bearable members of Star Fox. Give the poor pheasant a chance...

-BAA

P.S.: Oh, and by the way Falco haters, in SSBB, Falco can run faster and jump higher than Fox, and his Landmaster can fly higher, meaning that you can literally lift your opponents off the screen and kill them instantly in a matter of mere seconds. So...why do you insult him so cruelly again?

Short and sweet (or would it be short and sad?). That slight change of the weather at the end was smart. It's nice to know that Fox has some peace of mind, living for himself AND Falco.

Short chapter. Maybe should have added something with Wolf laughing evily at the death of Falco, and Fox and Wolf having a quick fight, which is stopped by the rest of the brawlers.

well, it seems that Falco got what he deserved. He overdosed, so he died. It was his fault.

Although he was never my favorite, I never insulted him or any other characters. They are all equally good in their own way, even ROB, Olimar, and Ice Climbers.

It was a good work of literature. Pat your self on the back. Off to read the next chapter.

This is still very sad...I'm glad that Falco's spirit came to tell Fox it would be all right. This story teaches a very valuable lesson on how words can break the soul. Amazing job with this. :)

Oh my god... I've- I've never read anything this sad before. I just... Wow.
I don't know what to say anymore.
This story is good, and I really like it. I hope you could continue this story (if possible).
RA

Oh my... I can't believe it...all the hate actually made Falco kill himself... I feel really sad now...and being that I myself am writing a story about the hate that is directed to the brawlers...
Poor Fox... :(