At first, I didn't believe my eyes when I saw the update. I hope you continue the story. It's one of my favorites.

Love the sotry! Can't wait to see where you take it :)

10/10 Grammar is amazing compared to Yoda writing 98% of these stories. Plot has me on the edge of my seat, always wondering what will happen next. Last but not least, how often will you upload a new chapter?

Okay this is delving deeper than I had anticipated. I was kind of considering the idea that this mystery woman was something like. . an alternate Ahsoka that fell to the dark side as a result of the visions that sent her back thirteen years.

But in this chapter there seems to be much more going on. . . Her father defeated Maul. . and her mother had defeated Maul too in another timeline I guess? She's definitely from the future but that's all I can tell right now.

This is an AMAZING story! I love the whole time travel with Ahsoka, with her being my favorite Star Wars character. You do such an awesome job portraying the relationships with Ahsoka, Obi-wan, and Qui Gon. They are a fun team! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

A very good story. In general, well written and unique.
My only 3 suggestions:
1]Scene breaks. Put a few letters or numbers up in a line to separate different scenes. Keep to letters and numbers, FFN seems to 'lose' other types of formatting and doesn't always show other symbols.

2]A bit more on descriptive text. It's a little hard to form mental images of what's going on sometimes.

3]Say who it is that's talking. Even if there is only 2 people talking, it can be hard to define who is saying what if you never say who started the conversation. This applies double if you have a single person speak across multiple paragraphs.

Like I said though, a good story over all, with a unique angle and some surprises as well.
Please keep it up. And stay SAFE!

Oooh the plot thickens :D Looking forward to seeing Qui-Gon's take on it :D

First, your mastery with words has greatly improved over the course of the story, so I wanted to just encourage you in that direction. You are a fantastic writer and you can see that as you go. Second, I am now sorely confused and I thought I knew who it was now I have about 4 different guesses. Please dont leave it hanging too long. Wish you all the best!

This story sucked me into it and didnt let me go for like hours and hours. I could not stop and now I'm really hoping that you won't wait another 2 years for an update :(

Bonding between the team is always good. And hurray for this being alive.

Great story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved it!

Please please please keep this going I was sad that it was left alone for two years it’s a great story so far

Autumn! So glad you’re back! Great chapter. Excited to see where it goes.

welcome back to the realm of the writing! You habe a fantastic story here, I wish you the best of luckand also funwriting it!