This story is amazing! I just found it and am already in love with it. I love your portrayal of Danny. He has been through so much. I am sorry to hear about the craziness that has been happening in your life. I hope you feel better and can get back to doing the things you enjoy in life.

. Love the story, hope to read more soon

hope you can get back to this.

oh course Danny is warming up to Alfred, he's a bit of a magnet to kids who get orphaned traumatically.

oh boy, well those two will be a big headache for poor Alfred... maybe they'll learn to get along after Danny gets back into the hero gig?

I'm so sorry that this is happening to you I don't even care about the story anymore I just wan't you to be alright, I may not be an expert on basically anything that has happened to you (I'm only 13) but I really hope that you are alright. I know that your family love you and believe in you and your abilities, just as I do. You are an amazing person and you just need to remember that out there in the world people care about you, even if they do not show it.

I hope that you can get through these hard times for me, your family, and everyone.

Be strong
Don't let the Bad things win
I have tried, my girls are now afraid of me dying everything they can't see me
I have still tried and it's not nice

That's really good, I like it!

i love you

Your health comes first not chapters of a story I hope your doing fine btw , this year has gone to hell in a hambasket and I hope you and your family are doing allright .
I won't bore you with anything about updates as it seems some people don't think before the type . I admire that you seem to have a jist on Danny's charitoristics ( apologize for the bad typeing I have alisum and it gets in the way ) as well as Sherlock Holmes too if I'm not mistaken .
I'll wait paecntly for the next installment

PS : I hope your foot feels better soon

Wow. First of all, I need to talk about the story. I'm in where it's going, even if I don't speak Esperanto and I'm too lazy to use Google on it. I'd give more detailed stuff, but I can't think of anything at the moment.

Next, it seems like life has thrown lots of crap at you. I guess all I can say is that that's okay. It's okay if today is a disaster, or tomorrow is. As long as you can hope for a someday that won't be.

I'm not sure how helpful that will be from a guy who knows nothing about you and is probably hundreds of miles away, but every night has a dawn. Hold on, and press forward.

Damn, it sounds like you've been through more crap than Danny has. I hope your situation improves.

The story's great, BTW.

this reread has been a treat! I love your characterization, it's just *chef kiss*

I'm excited for whatever you have planned, and when it comes down to it, you can't rush perfection. take all the time you need! we're glad you even took the time to sit down and write this.

I'm sorry to hear about everything that's happened, I thought I had health issues! I have a painful chronic disease that puts me in a wheelchair some days, and I was recently in a roll over car crash. Stay strong! Even if it sounds like you've been living this life longer and harder than I have.
I really like your writing a lot! I was wondering if Danielle was going to appear in this fic, she could be a great support for danny.
Thanks for your hard work!

Great chapter.
Don’t worry about a time limit, you take care of you first.