Loved this so much. This is sort of how I imagined Garrus acting on Menae, gushing about Shepard without really realizing it. xD I'll definitely have to check out more of your stories!

Nicely done. I thought it was so cute how proud Garrus was for being Shepard's lover. Awww

Oh this is really nice! I like Victus' character so it was nice having him appear, and who doesn't love Garrus? It's also a good little scene for remembering how bad the situation was for them on Minae (and how horrible that would be looking up to see your planet burning) so its a good little character piece too.

Anyway... I think this is really well-written and I'm quite curious about the story it was a part of.

Thanks for sharing! :)

loved it from beginning to end :) great job!

Loved it! :D

Oh, Victus. 3

I enjoyed that piece a lot; a nice look into what was happening on Menae from Garrus' point of view and how he was dealing with the situation in the wider galaxy and an excellent character-driven piece. Great work.

This is very good.