I love the story so much. Amazing way of adding cc into the story. Just wish there was more.

really good. you must update now

really good story so far! I kind of wish there was a male version of zelda, to balance out the fact CC exists. (I know i'm not that great at writing reviews. this is my first. )

Awesome beggining! Can't wait for the next update!

great story and nooo they can't die yet! D:
please update soon :3

Wow that was quick I'm glad your continuing the story though
And I liked it before so I'm sure ill like the revised version even more
I can't wait for new chapters ;D

I would have smacked too cc
Hate that's groose or should I say goose hes noisy and ugly just like one ;)

Can you put Rayd in, but call him Sain instead? and His loftwing is Ivory white, with black outlights- an ecliptic loftwing.

And I'm changing his sword. It is now the sword of Man... the Mortal Sword. when it is perfected, it is the sword of the world, the World Sword. It does not take seven sacred stones. it takes the three sacred flames, just like Fi. The Mortal Sword contains a spirit that looks more like a wisp than a person.

oh I love cc she is soooooo cool. please please please update soon.

This story is pretty good so far! Personally, I haven't played SS yet, but I've been meaning to for forever! I'm just hoping I can get my hands on a copy and play soon! But yeah, I really like it so far. It's interesting that it's from Link's POV. Most OC stories are from the OC's POV (Like mine ahah). Well yeah, I can't wait to keep reading!

Can I give you a character?

Name: Rayd

Age: 17

Race: Hylian

Gender: Male

Personality/Traits: He's a free spirit, but he's very loyal-To a select few who worm their way into his heart. He's Incredibly brave and unbelievably daring, but he's also very logical- Ironic, no? Actually, they fit together well.

Weapons/Powers: Earthly equivalent to the goddess sword, the Gate Sword, which becomes the World Sword when bathed in the light of the Seven sacred Stones. The sixth gives it it's final form, the seventh gives it the light to Slay Evil. on the other hand... he gets the roc's cape which turns into weak wings to let him glide to slightly far distances, a hand cannon(orb gun), a pair of boots that allow him to climb solid surfaces, a rod that allow him to conjure obstacles, a pair of gloves that makes him able to lift heavy objects, while at the same time allowing him to crush things, a long clawed arm-whip, and a Sitar(like a guitar)...that makes monsters stop and go for a short time.

Appearance: He has shoulder-length brown hair, sharp, wolf-like golden eyes, and a dark blue tunic. he refuses to wear his hat.

Come on you can beat that writers block
we want more chapters :)
i'm not sure how eight year oldish that sounded but i thought it was still okay
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
and'UPDATE SOON!

I will wait :)
Keep up the great work!
And
Update soon!

I think cc needs a bigger role so far it just seems like she's tagging along ya know
I'd still like to hear some of the story from her pov as well anyways
Keep up the great work!
And
Update soon!

Id like to see some chapters from CCs pov I wanna know what she thinks of link for she like him too
anyway
Keep up the great work!
And
Update soon!