So we have to wait until's skilled at writing stories?

Amazing

Yosha~! What a cool story this is! A neat story like this, while having its' fair share of mistakes and slip ups, mainly spelling mistakes, is a rather refreshing experience to read! Mainly because it's so descriptive that it's not that hard to lean back and imagine how the settings looks like.
However, there's the problem of "show, not tell", and you did quite a number with the tell part, I see! Sure, you could have tell the audience what the settings look like down to the last detail, but where's the fun in that? Your audiences aren't children (maybe?) with small attention span who you need to enunciate very clearly how the context and the setting looks like, that's just insulting. That and the description of the locations and setting just seemed like dragged on rather longer than needed and being describe in too much in detail. We get it! No need to be, "here's where Link and the Eds are in one long paragraph" when you could just easily explain it in a mere four or three lines, and even then, we could just go on the internet to see what it looks like if it's too vague or confusing.
Instead of describing what everything looks like, try to explain it from a subjective view from either one of the Eds or Link himself, so it'll add a flair of diversity from the usual monotone, objective view of the narrator. And if you're going to really insist on describing the setting in the narrator's voice, try to leave out a couple details or two so it'll add that hint of mystery stories need once in a while.
Of course, this is all subjective entirely, and I'm only riding on the presentation style of this particular fanfic, because I value presentation just a touch more than the standard aspects of stories, because the eloquence of prose can easily define a decent story from a below average story. So try to better yourself, without this little old review, because we all know you'll rise higher than your current level right now.
Go get 'em tiger~!
—TheCrazyJackalope

I'm so going to enjoy the next crossover heart of the pikmin.

I love this story and I want reading "heart of the pikmin". I have plan about "legend of Zelda breath of the wild X ed edd n eddy crossover" is new story for you want write this story. You're welcome TrueSapphire and I want hope reading heart of the pikmin or legend of Zelda breath of the wild X ed edd n eddy.

It's awesome for the eds to travel to other dimensions to meet other sentient species,see society's, gain knowledge, and use new technology.

Great story

*claps* This entire "project crossover series" should be an animated Ed Edd n Eddy movie. so well thoguht out, there were a few spelling errors here and there, but it didn't detract from the story itself, One of the best stories of ed edd n eddy and Legend of Zelda I've ever read, I personally can't wait for "Heart of the Pikmin" you hould involve the legend of the Umibozu into the story as well for logical parts, if you need to learn about the umibozu for Pikmin, check out this youtube video for more details. watch?vwvKwkv8_V0o

Keep up the great works of stories, for the pikmin themselves, I was thinking that Ed would use Red pikmin, double D would use yellow pikmin and eddy use blue pikmin. Red pikmin for Ed because of strength, Yellow for double D because of strategy with bomb rocks. and Blue for eddy because why not?

cool

That was cute ending to a cute little fanfiction

LOVE THIS! LOVE THIS! LOVE THIS STORY AND THIS FREAKING SERIES! :D

try an ed edd n eddy undertale story

I really enjoyed this story, I've been following your stories since your first ed story. I hope you write more and keep this going

Wow. That was quite a ride. Four years is a rather long time but... things can get in the way. This was a good story, all the way to the end.

And yeah, there's nothing wrong with having a break. For research and self training and all of that. We all have our own way of writing and we have lives. I hope you enjoy your break!

Good chapter