I am so completely in awe, I can't even discribe it. Amazing story line, fantastic grammar and characters actually in character. What else could I ask for? Stunning. I can clearly picture everything, and even though I've done the quests before in Skyrim, it's still like it's brand new.
Amazing job, can't wait for more. :)

You know who else ignored Alduin? Your Dragonborn. She traipsed around Skyrim for like, 3 years, blissfully unconcerned about the whole thing.

real good so far

real good...

Every time you write a sex scene, it's like the worst romance novel.

You know, I had a dream about you last night. How screwed up is that? I don't even like you.

Still loving this story, keep going!

You're bad at homonyms.

Visual gags don't work in a non-visual medium.

I am enjoying your stories. Just thought I should leave something positive to let you know :)

Please keep up the good work.

...Now, I would LIKE to say that your writing is a little better in this one. But I know that as your chapter count goes up, your prose gets worse. In a few chapters, this is going to be as mediocre as all your other stories.

It bothers me that we still don't know what happened to Lydia... But I'm still loving this story! Keep up the good work!

I just do not trust Ulfric.

Enjoying your latest so far, keep those chapters comin'!