I did actually reach the end, and I'm glad I read it all.

I was starting to think Hilda wouldn't get a happy ending the way things were going, but boy did that wrap up nicely. XD I look ridiculous, I can't stop smiling.

Your spspectacular writing was half the point. Props to you my friend, props to you.

I opened it and threw it dtrait in the garbage I can take a guess on what was in there

THIS WAS HILARIOUSLY AMAZING! !
And omg! It was published on my birthday! It's destined for me! XD

great stroy

"…You have impeccable foresight to have predicted this." N remarked, truly impressed.

That was the point where I lost it.

Well, that, & N's explanation of the hug. That was fabulous. XD

This was heartwarming and funny - I love a different spin on Hilda and I love how you've characterised them both. Great piece of work :)

KHue

This is really cute! And i like that you keep the Pokemon present in the story. Do many people don't include such an important aspect.

LOL's

I enjoyed this story. In fact, I wouldn't even mind if you turned it into a full fledged story, But I'm perfectly content with how this is. (:

That one shot was so cute and so well written! I loved how you portrayed Hilda and her denial. And N was cute as ever and I think his attitude was very in character. I applaud you, good job. This fic made me smile many times.

Denial. COMPLETE DENIAL! And usually that denial indicates that you, Touko, are scared to get hurt. And omg whso formal?! - all of it is making me feel dumb. A ugh...
Omg you better, YOU BETTER NOT REJECT HIM! BO or else you'd have a shit load of very, very, VERY Raging ferriswheelshipping fan girls at ya!

OwO totally love this! Love Ferriswheelhipping! Mahahah x3

HAHAHA XD I loved this! Touko (I call her that XD) was SO CYNICAL! That contrasting with N... I don't think I should be laughing but I am XD it was brilliant XDXDXD

This story was so cute! I loved it so much. N's innocent intellegence was just to cute and so was Hilda's stubborness. Anyways great story it was adorable.

Betrayed by a pokemon for a berry, what is the world coming to? Super adorable image of N feeding Darumaka :3

Meeeeep *flails*

I've been squeeing over this for the past few days. It's just so... so... ASDFGHJKL

But really, you did a wonderful job with this. It's so cute but so atypical and so fabulous!