Oh. My. Gosh. I need more November in my life. And Bard. Just everyone. I don't know if thinking of continuing this, but it's amazing and I love it. I just wanted to show my appreciation. :)

I have a St. Bernard who only eats around 2Ibs a day, I don't imagine a wolfhound could eat 5x that, unless she's just exaggerating. Love the story either way!

I loved this fanfiction! You're an incredible writer - seriously, you could publish something! And I know this was supposed to be a Hei/OC fanfiction, but I'm rooting for Charlie/Jack. It's sad that you haven't updated in quite a while...

Realising that this story was last updated a year ago caused me physical pain. No joking here.

I hope you continue this story I love it :3

I'm really liking Charlie with November.

I know this story is supposed to be hei/oc but the idea of Charlie and Jack is much more appealing right now. I don't like triangles although they add interest to the story. I have to say, you're doing an excellent job here and I want you to keep it up. I love bard the humanlike dog and still the fact that you've remained true to November 11 and Li. Your story has captivated me! I look forward to reading more. And congrats on graduating college, the job and pad :)

Your a natural! I like your style of writing. It surprised me that I actually like Charlie so easily. I'm usually very picky about Oc's but well, you made it easy. And you've definitely captured the true essence of November. I adore him!

Okay, I'm blown away. Seriously. I've been searching for a decent Darker than Black oc fic and this is the first good one I've been able to find. If you know of any others I'd be grateful for the heads up. Anyway-to the review!
First, I haven't read any of your reviews yet but if your getting people asking for more Hei/Charlie goodness... well they just don't have any patience do they? You fic says eventual Hei/oc so what's the prob? I'm enjoying all of these news facets to November 11's personality and having you write up scenes from Bards point of view purely to give us some insight as to what Hei's group currently thinks about the situation is, for me, pure indulgence: I LOVE IT! I love multiple-pov stories! Plus you've already sown ties between your main character and Hei so, woot!
You have also managed to incorporate Hei's somewhat unforgiving/merciless/yet compassionate, paradoxial disposition. Well done you. I see from your summary you intend to incorporate some more Yin as well. Awesome.
Wait, did you write that you're an editor now? God I'd love to know how the hell you became one. I wanted to go into journalism/publishing after leaving college but didn't have the first clue of how to go about it. I'm in awe, wow.
Can't wait for your next update; your writing is superb and sublime. Oh, and it has heart. Not that I'm writing anything you're not aware of. I hope.

This. It's just- I can't. I- Just please continue writing! x

That was awesome! I wish my dog would write me messages with his kibble. *.*

This is one of my favorite fics on dtb universe.

Li acts in a very true and convincing way while showing those subtle expressions that Charlotte sometimes happens to catch.
As the reaper he doesn't talks much and acts as i believe he would.

Charlotte is a very well (Extremely well) developed OC that is easily likeable and independent. Her relationship with Jack is very fun to read and convincing, and the same can be said of her interactions with Li.

Jack/November is very funny (he is laid-back hehe) and also fits what i believe is like his original personality.

Kane is interesting as, i believe he means no harm other than get the hell out of japan type of harm. too soon to comment more on him.

Overall the story is easy to read, it flows easily. The original plot is fitting well with the canon parts, shows you did your homework well ).

Bard is such a cool dog, please don't. harm him...

i am glad you kept Li/BK201 believable, some other stories make him very straightforward, which he is not.

If taking your time to release a new chapter means a better story/quality, then please do.

in the end, i am really enjoying this fic. it's not perfect but its already way above average, and the little issues that i don't even remember... you see i don't even remember them xD.

Keep up the great work.

Oh my gosh! I really enjoyed this update! I keep wanting to tell Charlie that Li is BK-201, but it's a story and she can't hear me. I absolutely loved Bard in this update. What an awesome dog. Great update!

That was a lovely chapter! Sometimes I skip around, but for your stories, they always seem to pull me in, and I end up reading every word! That little bit with November/Charlie was very nice, and I can only hope for more in the future. But also...HEI AND MISAKI AND NOVEMBER 11 AND CHARLIE better have one giant reunion! I'd love it to have everyone in one scene, but even having Hei and November 11 meet would satisfy my desires O.o
Good job! Lovely writing! UPDTE SOON!

I'm so glad you've updated! I absolutely love this story. I must say even though I am excited for Hei and Charlie interaction, I must say that I adore Jack and Charlie's relationship. I can only imagine how heartbroken this story is going to make me when Jack dies, in fact when I first experienced his death I was extremely distraught because I adore him! Anyways I'm glad you've updated, and I hope you update soon!