That was amazing. The images were perfect- I could picture every action perfectly in my head. You really brought out the essence of each character. Beautiful fic.

Rorschach: "Just give me a sugar cube already!"

This is amazing, and touching, and...beautiful. Just beautiful.

This was a great story. You put in a lot of effort and it was worth it because it came out really well :)

this is such a brilliant idea - I love how you write it through the outsider perspective - their relationship is ridiculously complicated but also adorable! I really enjoyed the hidden jokes etc

Great story! It had a lot of layers, and I enjoyed getting that outsider's perspective through Dr. Long. One word mistake caught my attention:

He used to walk around with this sign," Dan moves both hands as if hefting something heavy over his shoulder. "I'd see him patrolling around, always staring and banishing the damn thing..." (instead of "banishing," you mean "brandishing").

Otherwise a fun read!

Awww that got me right in the feelings! I love these two and this was perfect 3 well done

Very well done, well writen missing scene from the film.
It seemed logical that Dan would try to make contact with his partner and friend, and this story fit's the bill perfectly.
I liked the way that Long saw the changes in Dan, at the end seeing Nite Owl, but not knowing what name to put on to him.
The phantom sugar cubes, where a nice touch.